My Award-Winning Poem

bogey_j · 09-29-2010, 04:47 PM

I submitted this poem to a local competition and won the prize of $50

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trees are trash
man is victim
temptation played the vandal

trees are trash
venus flytrap
crows call here and there

trees are trash
time fills the cup
their lies hurt my body

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what do you think

spitzaer · 10-18-2010, 01:10 AM

congratulatons.

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 10-18-2010, 01:46 AM

It's frustratingly short

Well done.

infantrysgirl18 · 10-19-2010, 08:11 PM

awesome. it would sound really cool with a beat behind it. what you do with the 50 bucks :P

Queen Boo · 10-20-2010, 02:44 PM

I'd say thats a poem worth at least $50.
go u

IamTimmeh · 10-20-2010, 10:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bogey_j

I submitted this poem to a local competition and won the prize of $50

----

trees are trash
man is victim
temptation played the vandal

trees are trash
venus flytrap
crows call here and there

trees are trash
time fills the cup
their lies hurt my body

----

what do you think

*snap snap snap snap*

Freebase Dali · 10-21-2010, 12:04 AM

50 dollars was obviously the consolation prize.

~~Dirty~~ · 10-21-2010, 02:13 AM

I'm not really into poetry, but I'm not a huge fan. Doesn't make a bit of sense to me.

But congrats on your $50!!

09-29-2010, 04:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
bogey_j Music Addict Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 95	My Award-Winning Poem I submitted this poem to a local competition and won the prize of $50 ---- trees are trash man is victim temptation played the vandal trees are trash venus flytrap crows call here and there trees are trash time fills the cup their lies hurt my body ---- what do you think

10-19-2010, 08:11 PM	#4 (permalink)
infantrysgirl18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: i reject your reality and substitute my own Posts: 116	awesome. it would sound really cool with a beat behind it. what you do with the 50 bucks :P __________________ Stand in the closet and scream with me A mind that's like a fire Driven by the pain Better believe it.

10-18-2010, 01:10 AM	#2 (permalink)
spitzaer Groupie Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 25	congratulatons.

10-18-2010, 01:46 AM	#3 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	It's frustratingly short Well done.

10-20-2010, 02:44 PM	#5 (permalink)
Queen Boo From beyooond the graaave Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: The state that proudly brought you Disco Duck Posts: 1,513	I'd say thats a poem worth at least $50. go u

10-21-2010, 12:04 AM	#7 (permalink)
Freebase Dali Partying on the inside Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 5,584	50 dollars was obviously the consolation prize.

10-21-2010, 02:13 AM	#8 (permalink)
~~Dirty~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: USA Posts: 981	I'm not really into poetry, but I'm not a huge fan. Doesn't make a bit of sense to me. But congrats on your $50!!