A bunch of random emo crap (make fun of me here! :D)

Dayvan Cowboy · 09-19-2010, 09:17 AM

yeah. I'm going to go for it. I'm going to post all of my terrible angsty emo poems here and keep correcting them, keep evolving them, making them longer ect. ect.

first up:

Untitled 1

A girl walked across the Antarctican Plane,
Trekking across the desolate ice sheets, waiting for nothing.
She fell to the ground in sheer exhaustion,
The girl couldn't bear it anymore.
She had to give up, as it was the only valid option.
She took her coats and boots off,
and laid to rest in the snow,
thinking her last thoughts, and giving mental goodbyes.
She let the hypothermia kick in, and bid farewell to the frozen world she came to.

09-19-2010, 09:17 AM	#1 (permalink)
Dayvan Cowboy Basscadet Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Antarctica Posts: 1,258	A bunch of random emo crap (make fun of me here! :D) yeah. I'm going to go for it. I'm going to post all of my terrible angsty emo poems here and keep correcting them, keep evolving them, making them longer ect. ect. first up: Untitled 1 A girl walked across the Antarctican Plane, Trekking across the desolate ice sheets, waiting for nothing. She fell to the ground in sheer exhaustion, The girl couldn't bear it anymore. She had to give up, as it was the only valid option. She took her coats and boots off, and laid to rest in the snow, thinking her last thoughts, and giving mental goodbyes. She let the hypothermia kick in, and bid farewell to the frozen world she came to. Last edited by Dayvan Cowboy; 09-19-2010 at 09:27 AM.