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09-04-2010, 11:56 AM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Sep 2010
Posts: 1
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Song about piece
Hey guys, i am havin insane writers block.. and i have to make a composition for friday could anyone help me?
i wrote this ages ago and want to use it for a chorus i'd throw you to a river Free to flow peace surrounding you just like it was back home i want the song to be about a book i read, this girl has so much attention because of her illness and its too much for her to handel it all she wants is piece and at the end her boyfriend (can be anyone) takes her to the beach and 'smiles are throughout her face.' i dont know i just need help on verses and structure oh and a prechorus |
09-04-2010, 12:10 PM | #2 (permalink) |
Music Addict
Join Date: Aug 2010
Posts: 63
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*peace
Alright I'm down, but you have to give me something to work with. What if the first line was something like If all of my closests friends are here Why don't I know anyone In a room full of polite strangers I just wish I could get up and run |
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