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07-16-2010, 11:58 PM
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Rush
My first psong I write that when i play, doesn't sound so punkish, but i like it anyways. More out of old memories i guess
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verse- pictures representing, everything un spoken dreams checked, but never chosen Time standing still, almost frozen I see your smile, brings back memories Of a time when life was great no worries but now its too late chorus- If I could go back, I wouldn't change a thing leave all the mistakes i made, which made me me Then i would stay, just to see you once more Cause I just can't wait to see you But I guess thats why they say Don't rush your life away verse- I keep thinking, of old memories You and me, how life would be World is just, under my thumb Planing to, try out my luck Saying this time, I won't let go Of a time when life was great no worries but now its too late chorus- 2x then end with verse chords- 2x |
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07-17-2010, 12:13 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Jun 2010
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Love your lyrics!!! They are in fact very deep and yes, it can bring back old memories to reader/listener. It's very creative and I love the chorus in which the singer/writer is in fact reminiscing. I quite enjoy it!!! Keep it up!!!
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07-17-2010, 03:53 PM
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As a writer for songs, don't you ever have the wierdest inspirations at time? Anyways, asking if you can check out my song lyrics and if you want you can add some music to them, because frankly, I can only write the lyrics 
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07-17-2010, 07:56 PM
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Groupie
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Wierd inspirations? you have no idea =)
And sure, send me some lyrics through pm or if you want me email, w/e works. I'll try and find recording software and see what i can do for you. Though I won't be much help over the week since I'm heading down the shore, but i can work on chords and stuff for your songs lol =) |
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07-17-2010, 10:18 PM
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Confusion
Won't be on for the rest of the week since I'll be down the shore. I didn't get any writing today but decided I'll post a song I did a few months back. Oldschool but good =)
intro strum once-
16, victim of society 16, I think I'll pass on your conformity verse- Trying hard, not to lose what you own Sobriety, pretending not to get stoned Your love, something that i really want Your attitude, something that is constant Chorus- Right now I'm searching the world More to life then a chalkboard I'll be home when I find my destination For now I'm stuck with confusion verse- Believe me, when I say I'll be back Not easy, when your on the wrong track Everyday, I wake up with confusion Many days, sleeping with contradiction -Chorus- verse- Winding up, thinking about the future Sleeping it off, it's so perpendicular Fighting off, the monsters in my head Going against, things that are demanded chorus-2x then the after chorus chords  |
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07-24-2010, 09:39 PM
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Land of paradise
Punk song I made yesterday. Def sounds good when I play it, I need to get some recording software which I've been not trying to do lately. Anyway heres the lyrics:
Land of Paradise
intro-2x verse- I opened the door to a new world, where life isn't all that bright Kicking down what stands tall, pride goes down like a waterfall My mind is eaten by termites, Theres no more wrong or right Feeling the ash land down on you, Hearing the words I loved you chorus- Now even though it doesn't feel right You'll remember me for that time..in the land of paradise verse- Forgetting the words of wisdom, welcome to the new kingdom One man seeking treasure, another man seeking his future Everything just lost hope, life standing on one thin tightrope Finally I catch my breathe, then I'm almost shot to death chorus- verse- A new world is coming shortly, that is when grief will hit me Missing what came to fast, heading in all wrong paths Tell her I miss her greatly, this new world seems lonely Trying to find retribution, keep finding my own contradiction chorus- verse chords 3x Land of paradise Land of paradise Land of paradise Land of paradise Land of paradise Land of paradise |
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07-25-2010, 01:10 PM
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07-25-2010, 01:13 PM
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WOW!!! This is my favorite verse and the chorus is well-defined and I love the metaphor of a chalkboard!! Keep it up!!
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We only have one life, live it like it's the only, because it is. Love like it's the only thing in your heart. Listen to the things people say because they'll come back around someday. -My mentors and me |
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