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07-26-2010, 09:13 PM
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You Know I Would
New song. First song I made that seems long and good hahah. Anyway it's called You Know I Would.
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4x verse- It's been so long now, I can barely remember the time The time you told me, you needed me Like a twister, everything went outta control I lost you, I lost my soul Walking around town after all these years Seeing old places, seeing the old theater I watch as the earth grows so much stronger While I, grow so much weaker Why I left this place is far beyond me It's like waking up and forgetting the dream Chorus- If I could get it all back in one quick fast shot you know I would, you know I would If I could remember the times I spent with you, you know I would, you know I would It seems my skeletons are breaking out of the closet, and looking for the man who created all of this, all of this verse- Thinking all of these problems were so far away Whole time it was so close to me Keeping my mind set on unimportant things While all along I was breaking So many good times on 34 th street But nothing about you and me Trying to make sense of the fiction in my head Walking down the road of the abandoned Time will tell they say, But time just marks my body All these memories, just hide themselves away from me chorus-2x ending verse- I'm falling down No more ground In my own grave Much bigger then me Memories fade No one can save me and If you came back You wouldn't want me to survive this death trap |
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07-27-2010, 05:39 PM
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wow that is deep, I loved it instantly, Good work!!!
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07-27-2010, 05:45 PM
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Thank you!! I'm not the kind of person who makes long songs but this song was one that was catchy to the ear when I played it haha and thanks again for checking my youtube channel out
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07-27-2010, 06:40 PM
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I know how you feel ha and no prob!!
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07-28-2010, 12:47 PM
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Oldschool Punk song I wrote awhile ago, it's fast and sweet like punk should be. Title is medicine
Breaking things into words I'm not going to be bothered I heard my medicine arrived Shutting down for tonight Chorus- I don't need help Just a place to sleep I don't need help Just a place to eat I don't need help I just need a fix Right now, I feel so tired Why be bothered at 2pm I'm up when they stop knockin I'll be out before next month chorus- verse chords 2x end
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07-31-2010, 01:17 PM
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Very original!
 Great work!
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07-31-2010, 10:35 PM
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thank you very much haha
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07-31-2010, 11:32 PM
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song is route 66, lyrics may not make sense do to the album i want to record this with tells a story and this is a piece. But w/e. here it is:
-Intro- -verse- Jimmy where your traveling You won't find any fortune Jimmy where your going Is leading you to a end, of trust -Chorus- Catch me on route 66, lot of demons lot of pricks Catch me on route 66, lot of lies on the left side -Fill- -verse 2- When will you find the key to your inner self? Why doesn't somebody Just come to heal, your soul -Chorus- -chorus no instruments- -chorus-2x End
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