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Old 07-26-2010, 08:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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New song. First song I made that seems long and good hahah. Anyway it's called You Know I Would.

intro-
4x

verse-
It's been so long now, I can barely remember the time
The time you told me, you needed me
Like a twister, everything went outta control
I lost you, I lost my soul
Walking around town after all these years
Seeing old places, seeing the old theater
I watch as the earth grows so much stronger
While I, grow so much weaker
Why I left this place is far beyond me
It's like waking up and forgetting the dream

Chorus-
If I could get it all back in one quick fast shot you know I would, you know I would
If I could remember the times I spent with you, you know I would, you know I would
It seems my skeletons are breaking out of the closet, and looking for the man who created all of this, all of this

verse-
Thinking all of these problems were so far away
Whole time it was so close to me
Keeping my mind set on unimportant things
While all along I was breaking
So many good times on 34 th street
But nothing about you and me
Trying to make sense of the fiction in my head
Walking down the road of the abandoned
Time will tell they say, But time just marks my body
All these memories, just hide themselves away from me

chorus-2x

ending verse-

I'm falling down
No more ground
In my own grave
Much bigger then me
Memories fade
No one can save me
and If you came back
You wouldn't want me to survive this death trap
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Old 07-31-2010, 10:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
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song is route 66, lyrics may not make sense do to the album i want to record this with tells a story and this is a piece. But w/e. here it is:


-Intro-

-verse-
Jimmy where your traveling
You won't find any fortune
Jimmy where your going
Is leading you to a end, of trust


-Chorus-
Catch me on route 66, lot of demons lot of pricks
Catch me on route 66, lot of lies on the left side

-Fill-

-verse 2-
When will you find the
key to your inner self?
Why doesn't somebody
Just come to heal, your soul


-Chorus-
-chorus no instruments-
-chorus-2x

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Old 08-03-2010, 11:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
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-Intro-
I've been, thinking it over
My life, just isn't right
I'm giving it, more then just words

-Verse-
Ditching the same old life style
Walking, more then a mile
Turning, back what can be turned
Colors are coming back
No more black and white
I finally see what you were talking about

-Chorus-
Maybe gone but still around
Just wait and see

-Verse-
Tempting, but never showing
Glowing, even in darkneess
I'm finally, getting what you said
Believing all these new things
Never heard but now saying
Words i can't even describe

-Chorus 2-
Finally getting the chance to
walk away from life

-Solo-

-Chorus 2-

-Ending Verse-
Why don't, we restart this
No more, of this bull****
Going for what we desire most

-Keep playing verse chords 2x-
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Old 08-05-2010, 09:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Black Diamond

-Intro-


-Verse-
Another sunny saturday
Nothing really to do
Life turning into an ashtray
Mind going blank

-Pre Chorus-
But something doesn't seem right

Chorus-
What's wrong, Black Diamond in the sky?
False pretense is saying goodbye

-Fill-

-Verse-
Job, turned down
I was fooling around
Act your age they say
Why give what they want?

-Pre Chorus-
-Chorus 2x-

-Ending Verse-
Is Saying goodbye
Is Saying goodbye
Is saying goodbye
Is saying goodbye
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Old 07-26-2010, 09:20 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 07-24-2010, 08:39 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Punk song I made yesterday. Def sounds good when I play it, I need to get some recording software which I've been not trying to do lately. Anyway heres the lyrics:

Land of Paradise
intro-2x

verse-

I opened the door to a new world, where life isn't all that bright
Kicking down what stands tall, pride goes down like a waterfall
My mind is eaten by termites, Theres no more wrong or right
Feeling the ash land down on you, Hearing the words I loved you

chorus-
Now even though it doesn't feel right
You'll remember me for that time..in the land of paradise

verse-
Forgetting the words of wisdom, welcome to the new kingdom
One man seeking treasure, another man seeking his future
Everything just lost hope, life standing on one thin tightrope
Finally I catch my breathe, then I'm almost shot to death

chorus-

verse-
A new world is coming shortly, that is when grief will hit me
Missing what came to fast, heading in all wrong paths
Tell her I miss her greatly, this new world seems lonely
Trying to find retribution, keep finding my own contradiction

chorus-

verse chords 3x
Land of paradise
Land of paradise

Land of paradise
Land of paradise

Land of paradise
Land of paradise


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Old 07-27-2010, 04:39 PM   #7 (permalink)
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wow that is deep, I loved it instantly, Good work!!!
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Thank you!! I'm not the kind of person who makes long songs but this song was one that was catchy to the ear when I played it haha and thanks again for checking my youtube channel out
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Thank you!! I'm not the kind of person who makes long songs but this song was one that was catchy to the ear when I played it haha and thanks again for checking my youtube channel out

I know how you feel ha and no prob!!
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Old 07-28-2010, 11:47 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Oldschool Punk song I wrote awhile ago, it's fast and sweet like punk should be. Title is medicine



Breaking things into words
I'm not going to be bothered
I heard my medicine arrived
Shutting down for tonight

Chorus-
I don't need help
Just a place to sleep
I don't need help
Just a place to eat
I don't need help
I just need a fix

Right now, I feel so tired
Why be bothered at 2pm
I'm up when they stop knockin
I'll be out before next month

chorus-

verse chords 2x

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