My first set of lyrics in a long long time please let me know what u think

Tertianend · 06-25-2010, 08:58 PM

BAND NAME ----- Bullets break bones

SONG TITLE ---- Blood stain

cry alone
ive gone today
no more lies
and no more pain
ive gone away
coz i know
that i cannot stay

everyday
i woke up
missing you
but now i know
theres nothing
i could do

everythings changed
and i will
watch this blood
stain
im ending this right now
i wanted u around
but this pain is to much
to take

everyday
i woke up
missing you
but now i know
theres nothing
i could do

everyday is the same
the thoughts and feelings
rushing round my brain
cutting in cutting out
why do i start to cry this blood again

its stabbing me cutting out my soul
why the pain why the tears
why my life im drowning in my fears
im drowning in my tears
misplaced guilt for all to hear

Tertianend · 07-06-2010, 09:48 AM

omg come on guys 157 views and not a single comment anyone care to even tell me its ****e lol

leptoon · 07-06-2010, 04:59 PM

I think it's a bit morbid, but then again, so is almost every other song on here. I'm not a big fan of morbid/sad/depressing, so I'm gonna have to give this one a thumbs-down. Maybe you should try writing about something you love, rather than something you hate.

Tertianend · 07-06-2010, 08:44 PM

thanx for ur imput once im in a better frame of mind maybe i will give it a go but at the moment there aint nout positive in my life man lol

06-25-2010, 08:58 PM	#1 (permalink)
Tertianend Groupie Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: manchester united kingdom Posts: 3	My first set of lyrics in a long long time please let me know what u think BAND NAME ----- Bullets break bones SONG TITLE ---- Blood stain cry alone ive gone today no more lies and no more pain ive gone away coz i know that i cannot stay everyday i woke up missing you but now i know theres nothing i could do everythings changed and i will watch this blood stain im ending this right now i wanted u around but this pain is to much to take everyday i woke up missing you but now i know theres nothing i could do everyday is the same the thoughts and feelings rushing round my brain cutting in cutting out why do i start to cry this blood again its stabbing me cutting out my soul why the pain why the tears why my life im drowning in my fears im drowning in my tears misplaced guilt for all to hear

07-06-2010, 09:48 AM	#2 (permalink)
Tertianend Groupie Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: manchester united kingdom Posts: 3	omg come on guys 157 views and not a single comment anyone care to even tell me its ****e lol

07-06-2010, 04:59 PM	#3 (permalink)
leptoon Groupie Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 17	I think it's a bit morbid, but then again, so is almost every other song on here. I'm not a big fan of morbid/sad/depressing, so I'm gonna have to give this one a thumbs-down. Maybe you should try writing about something you love, rather than something you hate.

07-06-2010, 08:44 PM	#4 (permalink)
Tertianend Groupie Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: manchester united kingdom Posts: 3	thanx for ur imput once im in a better frame of mind maybe i will give it a go but at the moment there aint nout positive in my life man lol