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Old 06-12-2010, 04:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Hey people, need comments on this song i wrote

so yea people, just need someone to view my song it's not the best I've written, but who knows....

Loving Your Hate

Verse:
I pull myself apart
Losing the pieces
And some are crushed to dust
No matter how much I try
The screaming never ceases

I want to believe
That theres a chance for me
to start my life over and not grieve

Chorus:
I wish you would fall with me
And suffer what you put me through
But I will always say I love you, dear
I won't deny that somewhere in me
I believe you'll find me, dear, oh

Verse:
I trusted every lie told
And I walked into your empty core
Where the truth began to unfold
And even though I hate what you are
I find that this side of you I seem to adore

Chorus:
I wish you would fall with me
And suffer what you put me through
But I will always say I love you, love
I won't deny that somewhere in me
I believe you'll find me, love

Verse:
I thought I would find something true
I thought you were my perfect other half
But you are just as empty as me, just as cruel
I cry for you, my love, but you simply laugh

Chorus:
I wish you would fall with me
And suffer what you put me through
And I will always say I love you, dear
I won't deny that somewhere lost in me
I believe you'll find me, dear

I believe you'll find me
The pieces I lost
And replace the missing ones
But I'm just dreaming it
And I'm loving your hate
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