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07-22-2010, 03:05 AM
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I'd say that since you are posting lyrics in public, then your self esteem isn't too low!  Asking for opinions is brave and it is nice that you actually take them to heart rather than ignore them completely, given that you asked for them. About beating yourself up over lyrics...maybe you are just your own harshest critic, which isn't a bad thing at all. It sounds like you have a goal for your writing and so you know if it isn't quite meeting that goal.
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07-22-2010, 06:39 PM
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Thank you so much for your advice!!!!
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07-23-2010, 07:25 PM
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07-23-2010, 07:28 PM
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New song that again has no title i tried to change the theme of my previos songs
Life seems to fall
Just like raindrops And it's something we can't stall Face and fight it all Face the fear And then life will seem clear Ponder before you choose the allies And take a breath Close your eyes Then return to reality Become an oneironaut Feeling the impossible But you can't always be what you're not Send your will to me and leave the distraught Face life With only light in your eyes Ponder when you choose your allies Take in a breath Close your eyes Then return to reality (X2) Some mistakes are fixed Even though life is once In sinful fire I was lynched In You I was saved Ponder your chosen allies Taking in a breath Closing your eyes Returning to reality
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We only have one life, live it like it's the only, because it is. Love like it's the only thing in your heart. Listen to the things people say because they'll come back around someday. -My mentors and me |
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07-25-2010, 01:15 PM
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07-25-2010, 01:18 PM
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New thread for more songs!!! Cool
The Art of Forgiveness
Give me a chance to Recover what I lost The art of forgiveness Forever more I draw the picture, But you add the color Another life Is not what I need Another chance Is what it seems I need Give me a chance to Prove nothing is wrong The painting is incomplete We can fill it in I have the heart But you add the life Another life Isn't what I need Another chance Is all I need Another opportunity Finish the portrait I have started Add the light colors Showing the life in me Another life Isn't what I need Another chance Is all I need Another opportunity Make me believe it's real The art of forgiveness Forever more
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07-26-2010, 11:35 AM
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Keep all your stuff to one thread please.
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