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07-12-2010, 09:58 PM | #21 (permalink) |
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Bored again, didn't want to write about love, instead I wrote something diff....IDK
Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow
We can't make up what was done You can regret what you said but I can't make the pain disappear Just because yesterday was done We have to say is and will Not was because It already was, but it is right now and it will be There's no such thing as yesterday If we can't change it It's only today It's only tomorrow I was with you yesterday But I'm alone today I might be there tomorrow I might be alone tommorow But I can't change the past So I have to say is and will Not was because It already was, but it is right now and it will be There's no such thing as yesterday If we can't change it It's only today It's only tomorrow It's only today and tomorrow The past is the past and we have to live The present and future The past is the past and we can't live yesterday There's no yesterday If we can't change it It's only today It's only tomorrow It's only I can't change what I said I can regret what I said I wish I could take it back But now we both have to live with what we said |
07-12-2010, 10:03 PM | #22 (permalink) |
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Bored didn't try hard enough i think heard a friend say something like a "last time"
Last Time
I trip and fall but I can't cry Even though I want to die But I make myself stronger When I stand up after a fall I'm not going to stop moving Not for you, It was the last time. Not for you, Don't expect me to be there for you It's the last time For a fight So scream all you want 'cause I won't hear you tomorrow and I make myself stronger Every time I pick myself up I'm not going to stop running Not for you, It's my last time Not for a lie, Don't expect me to catch you Not for you, Not any more, honey It's the last time My last time saying goodbye I'm going to enjoy watching you die Because I've decided for you I'm going to like seeing you die There's nothing left in you Not for you, It's my last time Not for a lie, Don't expect me to stay Not for you Not anymore, honey It's the last time It's my last time saying goodbye X2 It's my last time dying for you It's my last time And I'm saying goodbye |
07-12-2010, 11:12 PM | #23 (permalink) |
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your first i felt was a bit repetitive and confusing with the phrasing, but your second made a little more sense. I like your second song, it was clear and easy to read, without the use of repitition. So, that's what I got, anyone else? Also, in your second song, I see at times it is forward-moving and at others remembering an arguement. Just what it sounds like to me, changes the mood and makes a less well-defined overall tone.
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07-13-2010, 04:59 PM | #24 (permalink) | |
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07-13-2010, 08:47 PM | #26 (permalink) |
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Cool, like'd to be my editor? Ha, only if you want, anyways, I'm thinking whether to preform a song I wrote or just preform one my band and I have learned, but I want something that says it's really us. Like something original, I would put it. All the songs have music to it, but I want to sing one with a true, strong, deep meaning to it. Also, they all have a sort of strong voice tone to it, but I think "You" has the only nice, soft rhythm to it and I know, the way the song sounds is important too, but I think the most important part of a song would be the part that is trying to give out a strong, truthful, message. Any idea???
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07-14-2010, 05:38 PM | #27 (permalink) |
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Quick question to people out there, My band's name is "Burning Ashes" we're not sure if we want to change it, but if we do, we need help to replace the title. Any suggestions? If not, then anyone out there, please, do not steal unless you can come up with something good. Thanx
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07-14-2010, 06:18 PM | #28 (permalink) |
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New Song this is completely a work in progress don't feel it yet with song or lyrics
THINKING FOR A MORE APPROPRIATE TITLE SUGGESTIONS?
I'm too consumed within myself Too lost to think right What choice was I given left, If only left to die or fight? Don't leave me alone here Don't leave me to die here I'm drowning too much in tears I can't escape all my fears I'm drowning within your pain But I still beg for you again All my cares have taken over These empty lies in which I live What reason is there left to fight, If we live to die and not die to live? You left me abandon here You left me bleeding here I'm drowning too much in tears Not strong enough to fight my fears I'm drowning in your pain I'm drowning in your blood Too afraid to die alone Too alone to see truth I didn't want to be left alone Your blood is my hands I'm drowning in my tears I'm not strong enough to run from my fears I'm drowning in my pain I'm drowning in(X2) I'm drowning in I'm drowning within Grieving you is all that I know Regretting is all that I know |
07-14-2010, 06:42 PM | #29 (permalink) |
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some songs give off the singer's feelings. I hope you can guess mine Grr...
Thought you could get away
Thought I didn't see it in front of me Thought you could take it away Well, I'm not the person you think I am I'm better than what you thought I was So shut up and listen I've got no secrets to hide But I understand when you don't know What is going on in my mind But just know I'm not just any fool You're not special to me You're just another in my life You won't be able to get to me Stop living in these clouds I'm not as low as you thought I was So shut up and stop I've got no secrets to hide I clearly know what, What is going on in your mind Hey, I'm not just any fool(X2) I'm not! (Shut up!) I'm not! I'm not! (Shut up!) I'm not! I've got no secrets to hide I clearly know what, What is going on in your mind I'm not just any fool So shut up and listen |
07-15-2010, 04:55 PM | #30 (permalink) |
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could i try to make this a song?
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