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07-10-2010, 12:12 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: somewhere and if you can here my call then you're down in this same world with me, if not, well....
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Second attempt for happy song
Hey people!!
 My second attempt for a happy song so yea.... please tell me what you think, I hope it is better than the previous ones i wrote!!!! {IN MY OPINION: It sounds more like a poem than a song}You You told me you love me And I believe you You told me you would never leave me And I want to let you know I love you too My heart has taken flight You became my light At last I can breathe At last I can see You always held me tightly I forgot to breathe I'd like to drift away To our special place In this world where every thing Doesn't make sense You were always there for me It's impossible to live in a world without you You are my cure for the disease What makes me right I need you too My pain has eased My sorrow has ceased I'm forgetting to breathe When it's you I see You always held me tightly I forgot to breathe I'd like to drift away To our special place In this world where every thing Doesn't make sense (X2) Giving me a reason to live Giving me the air I need to live I'd like to be with you when I sleep And when I wake up it's like i never stopped dreaming You always held me I forget to breathe you in Let's drift away To our safe place From this world where everything Doesn't make sense |
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07-10-2010, 01:14 PM
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depends, do i get credit? do i get guareenteed fame as well???? ha lol no seriously, no lie, do I? If not, I need a way to protect my work!!!!!! >( |
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07-11-2010, 08:04 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2010
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I like this very much. Especially this verse, it's really creative and I love the twist at the end. Thanks for sharing this. - Hoobie Goobie 
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07-12-2010, 09:53 PM
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muchas gracias!!!! thanx I do hope I can keep your interest, liked to hear feedback more often, like to hear what you honestly think
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07-12-2010, 09:58 PM
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Bored again, didn't want to write about love instead I wrote something...I don't know
Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow
We can't make up what was done You can regret what you said but I can't make the pain disappear Just because yesterday was done We have to say is and will Not was because It already was, but it is right now and it will be There's no such thing as yesterday If we can't change it It's only today It's only tomorrow I was with you yesterday But I'm alone today I might be there tomorrow I might be alone tommorow But I can't change the past So I have to say is and will Not was because It already was, but it is right now and it will be There's no such thing as yesterday If we can't change it It's only today It's only tomorrow It's only today and tomorrow The past is the past and we have to live The present and future The past is the past and we can't live yesterday There's no yesterday If we can't change it It's only today It's only tomorrow It's only I can't change what I said I can regret what I said I wish I could take it back But now we both have to live with what we said |
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