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04-11-2010, 04:24 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: the sunny devon
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need to get noticed...... song lyrics that i have writen
hello i have been working on this song for a couple of weeks and i think that i have done all that i cn to make it as good as it can be.. however i am open to nwe ideas.
please be as honnst as you can be as i realy do need some good and bad points so that i am able to get better so here goes when the phone rings Now that i am sat here all alone just wishing you would come back home i know inside that you were right i just wish i could have stopped that fight because.... when the phone rings i wish it was you how can you hurt me the way that you do was i just a simple screw why does it matter i am in love with you i looked back on the day the day that you walked away you walked straight out the door and told me i wont see you anymore NOW when the phone rings i wish it was you how can you hurt me the way that you do was i just a simple screw why does this matter i am in love with you Baby now i sit and pray just hoping you will come back my way i just wanted you to stay and tell me everything will be OK because when the phone rings i wish it was you how can you hurt me the way that you do was i just a simple screw why does this matter i am in love with you |
04-11-2010, 09:02 AM | #3 (permalink) | |
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I imagine that sounded a lot better in your head.
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