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Old 03-23-2010, 07:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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New to the forum, new to writing lyrics/music...blah, blah, blah. Enough excuses. If you like the lyrics, awesome. If they happen to not be your cup of tea then please pass on your knowledge as to how to make them better.

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Burning Alive
What can be said for those who stay silent?
What will be said of those who refused to take a stand?

For nothing, is all you have
If you aren’t willing to bleed
Just because you can’t see me
Doesn’t mean I’m not here

Who can this be, who burns himself alive?
Who will you be, one who destroys or reconciles?

For nothing, is all you have
If you aren’t willing to bleed
Just because you can’t see me
Doesn’t mean I’m not here
Doesn’t mean I’m not here

Burning alive
Screaming inside
Building a new fire
One that purifies
X2

For nothing, is all I have
It’s what I need to bring
To keep this fire burning bright
Give it all, to stay alive
Give it all, to stay alive
Give it all, to stay alive
Give it all, to stay alive
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Old 03-23-2010, 07:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Great job. You're style is sort of like mine. Check my stuff out if you like, the post with all my lyrics in it is titled "you're a d i c k".
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Old 03-27-2010, 03:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I'm noticing that I'm beginning to repeat my choruses a bit, in my lyrics, more and more. It doesn't seem so bad when I sing it to myself :P
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Dangerous
VERSE 1
I am an endless fighter
No one will match desire
It's time to draw my sword and win your heart
The campaign is beginning
This war is one worth waging
I will swing to kill for there is just one

CHORUS
Dangerous, dangerous love
It's dangerous, dangerous love
(This is) Made for us, made for us love
I'm dangerous

VERSE 2
You are the prize I'm seeking
There is no stopping me
This passion runs so deep my heart's burning
I will not stop till your mine
If not I'll surely die
This love is what you have been waiting for

-CHORUS-

Dangerous, dangerous Love
It's dangerous, dangerous love
It's made for us, made for us
I'm dangerous, dangerous

BRIDGE
Do you see it?
What's in your way?
I'm prepared to struggle
I will go and seize the day

-CHORUS-

Dangerous, dangerous Love
It's dangerous, dangerous love
It's made for us, made for us
I'm dangerous, dangerous
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Old 03-28-2010, 04:43 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Your lyrics are pretty good, there isn't too much use of cliches and the concepts are interesting. Keep it up.
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Old 03-29-2010, 04:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Soul: Engage
VERSE 1
How can I be here
Where You've become the sum all my fears
Why is it that You
Engage me on the lowest tiers

Where are You, I'll show
Where ever you want me to go
Who are You to know
The limits of my very soul

I don't know
How I got here

CHORUS
Come take my heart
I won't argue
There's no attempt to win back control
Engage my soul
Engage my soul

VERSE 2
What is this, I can't define
Where I have been all of my life
When did you become the whole
Of everything I've ever known

If this is, all that there is
On Earth, then why don't I give in
My life is full, let's pour it out
Releasing all my fear and doubt

I don't know
How I got here

-CHORUS-
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Old 03-29-2010, 04:46 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Nice. All your lyrics are good, but I like the most recent in particular.
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Old 03-29-2010, 09:49 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Nice. I liked Burning Alive the most.
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Old 03-30-2010, 12:53 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Thank you all very much for your encouragement! I love writing lyrics and I'll keep doing so!

This one is just one big gooey love song. Not usually my style but I'm a closet romantic...
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Love at First Sight
VERSE 1
Your eyes, they over power me
Hair in waves breaking from the sea
Your smile brings me to bended knee
Your love's spread over me

CHORUS
You arise like the dawn
You're as fair as the moon
You're as bright as the sun
This is love at first sight

VERSE 2
We play amongst the singing trees
Dance in fields as far as I can see
You're oh so beautiful I believe
You're sent here to captivate me

-CHORUS-

VERSE 3
Your lips like wine, so soft and sweet
Your kisses soft, trailing over me
Please God don't let this be a dream
Cause with You my life is so complete

-CHORUS-
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Old 03-31-2010, 01:56 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I'm almost finished with the music for this song and I'm so excited because this will be the first song I've written that will have music accompanying it.
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Renew
VERSE 1
First my ears, turn down
And my eyes, close down
Then my heart, shuts down
I am dying for love

CHORUS
Please renew
Please renew
I declare that I am fallen
Please renew
And fix what I have broken

VERSE 2
First my heart, melts down
And my eyes, look down
Then my ears, drop down
I am dying for love

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May I decrease
So you increase
Nations will fall
Glory to the Lord

-CHORUS-

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Old 04-01-2010, 01:17 AM   #10 (permalink)
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So yeah, I just put out my first song, based on the lyrics above. Give it a listen if you dare...

SoundClick artist: GoLove - Renew
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