The Lyrical Saga Of SljSlj

Sljslj · 07-16-2010, 05:10 PM

I got something. It's not that great, but atleast it's something. Not sure if they're both verses or a verse and a chorus yet.

Bitch slapping her heart
And French kissing your pleasures
Your lives, a castle of infinity
Burned down by physical obscenities

If you could see yourself
Through all the red and black
You'd try to save yourself
And you'd never look back

thomasracer56 · 07-30-2010, 04:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Sljslj

I got something. It's not that great, but atleast it's something. Not sure if they're both verses or a verse and a chorus yet.

Bitch slapping her heart
And French kissing your pleasures
Your lives, a castle of infinity
Burned down by physical obscenities

If you could see yourself
Through all the red and black
You'd try to save yourself
And you'd never look back

The second chunk o' lyrics(PARAGRAPH/STANZA 2) would not be bad at all for a chorus.

07-16-2010, 05:10 PM	#1 (permalink)
Sljslj The Omniscient Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Reno, Nevada, USA Posts: 998	I got something. It's not that great, but atleast it's something. Not sure if they're both verses or a verse and a chorus yet. Bitch slapping her heart And French kissing your pleasures Your lives, a castle of infinity Burned down by physical obscenities If you could see yourself Through all the red and black You'd try to save yourself And you'd never look back __________________ MY LYRICS Last edited by Sljslj; 07-17-2010 at 09:38 PM.