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11-11-2010, 05:03 PM | #161 (permalink) | |
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11-14-2010, 08:27 PM | #164 (permalink) | |
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11-15-2010, 03:20 PM | #165 (permalink) |
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5,000 views! I'm surprised this thread has gone this well and this long. When I first started this in March, I expected to maybe post 7 or 8 lyrics, get a few reviews and be done with it. I certainly didn't think I'd still be writing on a regular basis 8 months later and (not to brag) writing as well I am. I wanna thank everyone who reviewed, gave advice, or just helped me rack up views, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!
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11-18-2010, 04:27 AM | #166 (permalink) |
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Now I’m just going to close my eyes
Ignore the bright colors of dark lies And everything that’s tearing me down Wait here for my soul to come around Tranquility achieved through patience The only way passed present-tense Making amends with my grudge with time So that I may move forward in line My whole life feels like an equation Wrought to be saved for an occasion I’m not nigh divisible by fear Still the calculator may be cleared
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11-20-2010, 06:50 AM | #167 (permalink) |
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I'm thinking about using this lyric for the song I'm working on, though I may decide to keep it instrumental. Anyway, this is basically about finding enjoyment in witnessing the apocalypse.
MUSHROOM Mushroom Mushroom Mushroom Clouds dance over my head Rain falls and melt my skin I know this is backwards But I like the way it feels Mushroom Mushroom Mushroom Hope did live, now it's dead To all us decent men I know this is backwards But I like the way we end I like the way it ends I like the way the mushroom climbs Across the sky I like the way it hurts I like the way the mushroom kills Across the land (The way the) Mushroom (The way the) Mushroom The way the mushroom kills
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11-23-2010, 01:39 AM | #168 (permalink) |
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I've been thinking about what I wanted to do with the lyric, "Awake Yet?", for a while.
In a perfect world, I'd have a female vocalist to work with. She would sing the first two stanzas. We would both sing the next stanza, me with growling vocals and her actually singing it. Our two voices would, of course, have to compliment eachother here, which may be something we'd have to work on. I would sing the whole next part. Then back to us singing together until "Is this worth fighting for?", and I would sing the next two lines. Then she would finish by singing the last five lines. The instrumentals would poppy, but heavy. They'd be fairly consistent, changing only a little throughout the song. This is something I might need help with, seeing as I'm not very good at any instrument. This is mostly just me thinking out loud, but say something if you think you can help with instrumentals and/or vocals, 'cause it would be very cool to make this happen.
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11-25-2010, 09:29 PM | #169 (permalink) |
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You’re cold
Icicles form off your bones Polar bears inside your soul You’re alone in the tundra Alone You’re cold You try to make a snowman But it looks just like the reaper A sign of where you’re heading You’re so cold You’re cold There are still many questions Like how are you still alive? Might you really be in hell? How can this ice make you melt? You melt EDIT: I didn't really like this piece much at first, but now that I read it again, I like it alot!
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11-28-2010, 06:24 PM | #170 (permalink) | |
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