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11-01-2010, 05:14 AM | #151 (permalink) |
Dat's Der Bunny!
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Location: Ireland
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You know, I don't really have anything particularly critical so say about any one of your lyrics right now, but I read the start of this yesterday, and then read this page today, and the amount your ability to write has grown is ridiculous. You've gone from slapping down the first thing that comes into your head, which made for an entertaining read, but not for groundbreaking artistry, to the last page, there's a depth to each lyric that definitely wasn't there are the start.
So yeah, basically, keep up the good work!
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11-03-2010, 12:09 AM | #153 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Brussels
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I wouldn’t be up to judging your lyrics as I’m not a native of the language of Shakespeare, but I’m listening to your grooveshark. «Liquid tension experiment» and I really enjoy it. You use a lot of different atmospheres (from hard rock to jazz rock kind of music). It’s an appealing combination. The production is on an equally high level. Congratulations!
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11-03-2010, 08:43 PM | #154 (permalink) | |
The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
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My entire way of thinking has changed since I started this in March, so this was simply the best time I could've chosen to start writing (of course, I didn't know this back in March). Any other span of 7 months throughout my life thus far hasn't brought this much change from beginning to end. I'll definitely continue to post my writings here. I feel like the next few months are going to bring more big changes and therefore changes in my lyrics.
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11-03-2010, 08:44 PM | #155 (permalink) | |
The Omniscient
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Hahahahaha... Those songs on the grooveshark aren't by me, just stuff I enjoy listening to. I've only ever tried to record one song and it isn't even finished yet. Sorry that the link saying "My Grooveshark" misled you.
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11-04-2010, 04:49 AM | #157 (permalink) |
The Omniscient
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I used to play Xbox Live all the time and my game of choice was Halo 3. In Halo, there's a weapon called the Spartan Laser, so I decided to name my Xbox account SpartanLzrJesus. Over time, I started to use Slj for just about everything and eventually (for what reason I don't know) SljSlj. I also realized Slj is my initials in last, first, middle format.
That's the story of how Sljslj came to be, I wish it was more interesting.
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11-04-2010, 10:43 PM | #158 (permalink) |
The Omniscient
Join Date: Mar 2010
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I THOUGHT...
I thought when I found the meaning of life I’d know the next step I’d have to take But in this universe, there’s no escape In the mirror, always redundancy Fitting perfectly in that square-shaped hole I thought when I lost my fear of death I had nothing to be afraid of But inside my head, there’s still pain I’ll never find any sort of peace in there ‘Cause there isn’t a damn thing I fear more Than life There may not ever be an end An eternity to descend There may not even be a start Of this, always a part I thought when I found another way The previous door would close shut Shut up the demons on the other side They’re still haunting, swarming all over me There’s nothing more I can do with this now This life Everything loses itself now There may not ever be an end An eternity to pretend There may not even be a start A living, breathing piece of art Of this, always a part Everything loses itself now I dig a hole into what once was Buried in emptiness, over my head Everything swallows itself whole I dig a grave into the blue sky Buried in empty space, over my head For the final time, I’ve been misled I thought when day transformed into night I’d run away, never be seen again But in this forest, the wolves have spotlights They make me blind and watch my every move Follow my tail, my trail glows so bright Bright white I thought when I found it was all in my head It would just go away and leave me be But there’s still so much ****ing pain I can never find any sort of peace here ‘Cause there isn’t a damn thing I fear more Than life There may not ever be an end An eternity to descend There may not even be a start Of this, always a part There may not ever be an end An eternity to defend There may not even be a start Of this, always a part There may not ever be an end An eternity to descend There may not even be a start Of this, always a part
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11-05-2010, 02:23 PM | #159 (permalink) |
The Omniscient
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Location: Reno, Nevada, USA
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LEAVE THE CAVERNS ALONE
Leave the caverns alone They were never meant to Be discovered by you Leave the mind games at home There’s no room for them here What the hell do you want? Anyway What the hell do you want? Let my brain melt alone Your thoughts only burn it You’re just too weak for this Sorry, but You’re far too weak for this All I ask of you, sir Leave the caverns alone Let this place be my own You’ve the rest of the world To do with what you please Please, please leave me alone Leave the caverns alone They were never meant to Be discovered by you I just want this one thing One thing to call my own Let this place be my home My one and only home
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11-10-2010, 06:58 PM | #160 (permalink) |
The Omniscient
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I'm looking for an artist to make songs out of some of my lyrics. I've decided, given that I have a hard time singing and making music that fits the lyrics, I'm better off writing lyrics for someone else.
I've selected a few that I'd like to hear as an actual song, so if you're interested, PM me. I'll tell you the ones I've picked, but if you see one you'd like to do, don't hesitate to ask about it. This is directed mostly at those who can't write lyrics, but can write music. This way, we would both benefit equally. I'd also like you to be a metal singer/screamer, but I'm definitely open to other styles. Thank you in advance.
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