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Old 03-22-2010, 09:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Song Critique Plx? "Oh, Karma"

Harmer, harmer
you know this isn't me

Armor, armor
a shell, because of she

Farther, farther
away till you can't see

Karma, karma
what more am I to be?

Bitterness, better this
When my punishment undeserved,
Bitter this, betterness
I hope for change, absurd.
Betterness, bitter bliss
Only when alone,
Bitterness, better bliss
do I dread the come home.

Blame me, blame me
for reasons unknown

To see, to see
the pain to me you've shown

Feeling, feelings
disregarding my own

Karma, karma
rules apply to them alone

Bitterness, better this
When my punishment undeserved,
Bitter this, betterness
I hope for change, absurd
Betterness, bitter bliss
Only when alone,
Bitterness, better bliss
do I dread the come home.

Concerned, concerned
when our tears shed

Unheard, unheard
my cries of help have been

My word, my word
and support I gave when

Oh karma, karma
where the hell were you then?

Bitterness, better this
When my punishment undeserved,
Withered this, betterness
my hopes, like fire, burned.
Betterness, withered is
And once again, I'm alone.
Bitterness, bitterness
Oh karma, to me your face was never shown.
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