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03-01-2010, 04:08 PM
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Account Disabled
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 5
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i was bored so i wanted to mak a song
her it is if wan to add anything to it then you ken if u do than put it on youtube and call it ''mcarthur''s song'' and put the lyrics if you can ok
 U always say we like fire and ice its lik im from a whole different world but now you sayy u think i hav it alll but truth is.... i never knew wat it was lik to hav it all i never thought that i would ever fall i ask myself am i jus part of a big ploooot but thenn i knew... heyy now imma rock star im living the big life i goooonna shine and the faaame is minne an nnnoooo onnnesss takin dat away from mmmeeeee |
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03-02-2010, 04:08 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Sep 2007
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Here's a bit more to add to your song. i basically took your concept of a past love thats deserted you, but now your (seemingly) better without her.
U keep sayin that we-re fire and ice its like im from a dif-REnt world and now you say i have it all, but truth is... i never knew what it was like. and my life, is never right. i had no pages like a hollow book. so i wrote me a brand. new. sto-ry now im here, now im big. my past is gone and im a whole im a star, and i have it a-ll those days, so hard brought so close but pushed so far and my heart, became shards drunk and lost in the bar. face down in my drink you were only thing i know no lower for me to sink i had to let-you-go... now im here, now im big. my past is gone and im a whole im a star, and i have it a-ll you left me, im doin good on the top. like you never thought i could... i dont care what you thought and now you know that you should never have let me rot i bet you'd change things you could... now im here, now im big. my past is gone and im a whole im a star, and i have it a-ll and im here.. and im big... with nothing left to do. im a star, i have it all and the only thing i dont have is you... |
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03-02-2010, 12:03 PM
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The Sexual Intellectual
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Somewhere cooler than you
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You might get more feedback if you write in English
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03-02-2010, 03:50 PM
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أمهاتك[وهور]Aura Euphoria
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Florida/Buffalo/CT
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 Was about to write something along those lines, but you killed it man.
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