i was bored so i wanted to mak a song
 

her it is if wan to add anything to it then you ken if u do than put it on youtube and call it ''mcarthur''s song'' and put the lyrics if you can ok :tramp:

U always say we like fire and ice
its lik im from a whole different world
but now you sayy u think i hav it alll
but truth is....
i never knew wat it was lik to hav it all
i never thought that i would ever fall
i ask myself am i jus part of a big ploooot
but thenn i knew...

heyy now imma rock star
im living the big life
i goooonna shine and the faaame is minne
an nnnoooo onnnesss takin dat away from mmmeeeee

Here's a bit more to add to your song. i basically took your concept of a past love thats deserted you, but now your (seemingly) better without her.


U keep sayin that we-re fire and ice
its like im from a dif-REnt world
and now you say i have it all,
but truth is...

i never knew what it was like.
and my life, is never right.
i had no pages like a hollow book.
so i wrote me a brand. new. sto-ry

now im here, now im big.
my past is gone and im a whole
im a star, and i have it a-ll

those days, so hard
brought so close but pushed so far
and my heart, became shards
drunk and lost in the bar.
face down in my drink
you were only thing i know
no lower for me to sink
i had to let-you-go...

now im here, now im big.
my past is gone and im a whole
im a star, and i have it a-ll

you left me, im doin good
on the top. like you
never thought i could...

i dont care what you thought
and now you know that you should
never have let me rot
i bet you'd change things you could...

now im here, now im big.
my past is gone and im a whole
im a star, and i have it a-ll

and im here.. and im big...
with nothing left to do.
im a star, i have it all
and the only thing i dont have is you...

You might get more feedback if you write in English

thanx

:rofl: Was about to write something along those lines, but you killed it man.

killed it in a good or bad way?!?:shycouch:

can you be my ong writter my name is lonney and I NEED A WRITTER
:wave: