teehee_1212

I wrote some lyics to a song and was wondering what people thought...


As the crickets sing me a lullaby and the birds all fall asleep,
I remember what you said to me as I lay down to weep,
Dry your eyes my baby now and think of you and me,
'Cuz I am here and so are you and this is all we need,

Do you remember, the times we shared?
Do you remember, the things you said?
Do you remember, what happened here?
Do you remember, what we did that year?

As the birds outside my window chirp and pull me out of sleep,
For a second I think you're still here in this bed with me,
But then a thought pops in my head and I remember what you did,
I start to cry but tell myself that this is nothing big,

Do you remember, the times we shared?
Do you remember, the things we said?
Do you remember, what we did here?
Do you remember, what happened that year?

As I go right through my day, you never leave my head,
I wish I'd never said those things and I start seeing red,


It's not finished but I'd like to see what someone else thinks
=) thanks