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Old 03-04-2010, 07:15 PM   #31 (permalink)
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Holy. You. Are. So. Amazing. At. Writing. Music! These are soooooooo good! I'm so jealous of your mad skilz. check mine, they aren't new, but they aren't old.. (:
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Old 03-13-2010, 09:29 PM   #32 (permalink)
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Inside-Out

It feels as though I've been watching my life
through spare eyes
like my mind's worlds apart
and my personality's a disguise

Things I want to say are held back
due to fear of consequences
and though I don't like it
I see right through my own pretenses

Inside Outside
Upside Down
dig through smiling eyes
and you'll discover the frown

Upside wrong side
right side out
I do not care
for what your life is about

I'd like to believe that life isn't fair
or blame it on fate to avoid need for care
but I know I'm a liar, that it's not true
I need to become more see-through

I sometimes feel I am made of plastic
pretending to like who I'm told
it seems no measure is too durastic
when you're only living for gold

Left side right side
wrong side in
we all must stop
before we begin

each side all sides
no side out
we're losing human
of that there's no doubt


(a comment on humanity in general)
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Old 03-15-2010, 04:55 PM   #33 (permalink)
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Magic Box

It does what you want it to do
Need one more? It makes you two
It finds what needs to be more found
It looks like Thought and Feels like Sound

Chorus- It's a magic box
take a look inside
you never can know
what you might find

You can waltz to the color of a different smell
ring the bed and sleep in a bell
sick it on the cure, the man and the ex
grow a twin, develop a hex

Chorus

Tell it your secrets
let it help you lie
stir and bake
half a dangerous pie

if your interest is piqued
drop me a word
send me your love(or soul?) and the deal
is secured

No need to cry or whine or moan
get a magic box of your very own1

Chorus

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sorry about these last few songs being terrible, I'm experiencing difficulty writing a half decent song.
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Old 03-15-2010, 08:03 PM   #34 (permalink)
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Bad? Hell no!
These are a million times better than mine, so shushh !
I'm pretty in love with the song inside out! It's magnificent! Also, I love how you HAVE views on the world at fourteen, most guys don't give a ****, and if they do, they don't talk about it. I'm going to try to write a song, not about love, and you're to thank. So, thank you! (: please keep this up! Your songs make me smile!
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Old 03-17-2010, 02:30 PM   #35 (permalink)
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No, they've actually all been terrible since, in my opinion, In The City.
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Old 03-17-2010, 07:41 PM   #36 (permalink)
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I love them all! You have mad skills.
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Old 03-17-2010, 11:42 PM   #37 (permalink)
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dude, you are real good! and you got as decent view of life as it is. i agree with everything you have expressed in your songs! your amazing at this!
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Old 03-18-2010, 03:50 PM   #38 (permalink)
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dude, you are real good! and you got as decent view of life as it is. i agree with everything you have expressed in your songs! your amazing at this!
why thank you.
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Old 03-23-2010, 05:37 AM   #39 (permalink)
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I really like inside out a lot. I aslo like magic box, but there's something about that kind of bugs me. I'm not really sure what. It might be that it's a little too random for me. BUT that's just my opinion, and I love a lot of your stuff,
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Old 04-08-2011, 03:46 AM   #40 (permalink)
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Dude, this is exactly the way of writing I love! The nothing man is so ****ing funny! Seriously dude, make music to them and I would gladly listen to it :3
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