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03-13-2010, 09:29 PM | #32 (permalink) |
Instrumental Octopus
Join Date: Jan 2010
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Inside-Out
It feels as though I've been watching my life through spare eyes like my mind's worlds apart and my personality's a disguise Things I want to say are held back due to fear of consequences and though I don't like it I see right through my own pretenses Inside Outside Upside Down dig through smiling eyes and you'll discover the frown Upside wrong side right side out I do not care for what your life is about I'd like to believe that life isn't fair or blame it on fate to avoid need for care but I know I'm a liar, that it's not true I need to become more see-through I sometimes feel I am made of plastic pretending to like who I'm told it seems no measure is too durastic when you're only living for gold Left side right side wrong side in we all must stop before we begin each side all sides no side out we're losing human of that there's no doubt (a comment on humanity in general)
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03-15-2010, 04:55 PM | #33 (permalink) |
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Magic Box
It does what you want it to do Need one more? It makes you two It finds what needs to be more found It looks like Thought and Feels like Sound Chorus- It's a magic box take a look inside you never can know what you might find You can waltz to the color of a different smell ring the bed and sleep in a bell sick it on the cure, the man and the ex grow a twin, develop a hex Chorus Tell it your secrets let it help you lie stir and bake half a dangerous pie if your interest is piqued drop me a word send me your love(or soul?) and the deal is secured No need to cry or whine or moan get a magic box of your very own1 Chorus _____________________ sorry about these last few songs being terrible, I'm experiencing difficulty writing a half decent song.
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03-15-2010, 08:03 PM | #34 (permalink) |
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Join Date: Feb 2010
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Bad? Hell no!
These are a million times better than mine, so shushh ! I'm pretty in love with the song inside out! It's magnificent! Also, I love how you HAVE views on the world at fourteen, most guys don't give a ****, and if they do, they don't talk about it. I'm going to try to write a song, not about love, and you're to thank. So, thank you! (: please keep this up! Your songs make me smile! |
03-23-2010, 05:37 AM | #39 (permalink) |
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I really like inside out a lot. I aslo like magic box, but there's something about that kind of bugs me. I'm not really sure what. It might be that it's a little too random for me. BUT that's just my opinion, and I love a lot of your stuff,
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