Paranoid Ghost Songs
 

Hey, this is my first ever song. Please rate it.

LIES!

Paranoid that's what you are,
Annoyed with everone, anyone,
Who says your wrong, (repeated, louder)
And all they say are...

LIES, everythings
LIES,all we hear are
LIES,we're fed by
LIES, all we know are...

Paranoid, you're really weird,
They are so very feared,
By everyone you know, (Repeated, louder)
And all they say are...

LIES, everythings
LIES,all we hear are
LIES,we're fed by
LIES, all we know are...

Paranoid, so am I,
Pursued by the Goverment,
All we do is run for them,(Repeated, louder)
And all they say are...

LIES, everythings
LIES,all we hear are
LIES,we're fed by
LIES, all we know are
LIES!

Thanks!

Way too generic man I'm sorry. Like seriously this is just blind, angsty, unoriginal writing. Keep at it though. It takes practice.
Best of luck.

I've found a lot of lyrics by themselves like this sound a bit corny, but if their put to the right music it can sound alright.

Thanks for both your comments, I'll keep trying.

Keep on Keepin' on.

Song: God, A.K.A, Creep
 

Hey, this is my second song, any comments?

God, A.K.A, Creep


CHORUS
Jealous,
Racist,
Sexist,
Facist.

Egotist,
Homophobic,
that’s,
You.

Dear God, get lost,
You egotistical little creep.
Your racist views,
Are annoying me.

Oh my dear God,
I hate you weirdo.
I wish you go off,
And die somewhere.

CHORUS

I hate your way,
I wish you would,
Just go and get,
LOST!

Leave me alone,
Please you racist.
You creepy homophob,
Go bother someone else.

CHORUS

*2

I like it. What genre is it?

Sorry, repeat.

It's sort of punk. Its like a rant against religion.

Song: Life in Hell
 

Another song made by me.

Life In Hell

Chorus
Go on then,
Kill me,
Let me fly,
Away from you.


Life in hell is nice,
Compared to living with you.
I want to leave you,
Just run away from you.

Chorus

Why do you torture me so,
Burn my heart away?
Pull my love out me,
Why do you do this?

Do you think it’s funny,
To see pain in my face?
Do you find amusement,
In the torture?

Chorus

Life in Hell,
Is rather nice.
*3