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Join Date: Jan 2010
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I stand there looking at her, knowing what I have to do But my selfishness and stubbornness is tearing it apart I could just say a single word, her life would change forever But the coward little boy inside, is letting it fall apart. I see the tears running down her face Her makeup like a big displace She cries out like a wounded soul Shot in the heart by nameless fool (x2) Her pain is clear and I’m aware the damage I have done Mistreated and misguided I have let her to believe That I’m a man of integrity, but now I get to see The truth is far from original, it’s nothing but deceit. I see the tears running down her face Her makeup like a big displace She cries out like a wounded soul Shot in the heart by nameless fool (x2) I sit here in emptiness, praying for the one chance to Tell her that I’m sorry, to show her that I changed But life is fast and she is gone and all I got to blame Is the coward little boy inside who did control the game. I see the tears running down her face Her makeup like a big displace She cries out like a wounded soul Shot in the heart by nameless fool (x3) Last edited by tkp2005; 01-24-2010 at 06:16 PM. |
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