Plop Plop Plop, Poop Poop...Poops Go Plop in the Pot!

t3hplatyz0rz · 01-23-2010, 11:23 AM

I would advise you step out of your comfort zone and write something more serious or experimental. Any serious writer knows that staying in your comfort zone too long is what causes writer's block!

The first song was was with good music. I personally think it would've been better, though, as an instrumental song than with those stupid, stupid, lyrics.

Outlaw Ramblin' is pretty good. I think that it's a lot funnier than the poop song. But, as a song, you really don't have that much.

"Kindness is the Key" is extremely good. As a song. It always manages to catch me off-guard with it's strange rhythms. But it still manages to be relaxing. That's good. Very good. I think I like you as a serious musician, but not quite as much as a humorous one.

Thrustin · 01-23-2010, 05:51 PM

I am not comfortable expressing real emotion through lyrics/poetry. I would much rather sing/play emotionally about a topic that is emotionally neutral. I know that it would help my music become more accepted if I created a sense of empathy within people, or examined the human condition through words, but it's just not in me.

01-23-2010, 11:23 AM	#11 (permalink)
t3hplatyz0rz Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: In the moment Posts: 102	I would advise you step out of your comfort zone and write something more serious or experimental. Any serious writer knows that staying in your comfort zone too long is what causes writer's block! The first song was was with good music. I personally think it would've been better, though, as an instrumental song than with those stupid, stupid, lyrics. Outlaw Ramblin' is pretty good. I think that it's a lot funnier than the poop song. But, as a song, you really don't have that much. "Kindness is the Key" is extremely good. As a song. It always manages to catch me off-guard with it's strange rhythms. But it still manages to be relaxing. That's good. Very good. I think I like you as a serious musician, but not quite as much as a humorous one.

01-23-2010, 05:51 PM	#12 (permalink)
Thrustin Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Willsbury Posts: 65	I am not comfortable expressing real emotion through lyrics/poetry. I would much rather sing/play emotionally about a topic that is emotionally neutral. I know that it would help my music become more accepted if I created a sense of empathy within people, or examined the human condition through words, but it's just not in me.