First time recording

danman0407 · 01-14-2010, 01:31 PM

Hey guys,

For the past year or two I've been writing my own music, and then later recording my songs into tracks. I've been anxious to add them to a playlist online, because I've only heard the feedback of my songs from my close friends.

I've written I think eight(or nine) songs over the past year and a half, and the majority of them are about love troubles(obviously). I never really knew if the lyrics were ever adaquete enough for the public(haha). Personally I think they could definitely use some work.

I record my music and upload it to my music myspace(i know, pretty unofficial), where I don't really get many plays, considering I don't advertise at all. I'm asking that you can listen to the songs I have and give me some feedback? It'd be greatly appreciated, and I really want to improve.

Thanks to everyone who lets me know what they think about the guitar parts as well as the lyrics.

Later,

Daniel

Urban Hat€monger ? · 01-14-2010, 01:36 PM

This forum is for members to post lyrics & songs

Not an excuse for anyone to sign up just to whore out their myspace.

VEGANGELICA · 01-14-2010, 01:48 PM

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Originally Posted by danman0407

Hey guys,

I record my music and upload it to my music myspace(i know, pretty unofficial), where I don't really get many plays, considering I don't advertise at all. I'm asking that you can listen to the songs I have and give me some feedback? It'd be greatly appreciated, and I really want to improve.

Thanks to everyone who lets me know what they think about the guitar parts as well as the lyrics.

Later,

Daniel

Hi Daniel,

If you send me a private message with your MySpace page URL, I'd be happy to listen to your songs and give you my feedback. I tried searching for DanMan on MySpace and found someone who writes poems...but there were no songs, so I don't think it is yours.

All the best,

--Erica

01-14-2010, 01:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
danman0407 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Northern VA Posts: 1	First time recording Hey guys, For the past year or two I've been writing my own music, and then later recording my songs into tracks. I've been anxious to add them to a playlist online, because I've only heard the feedback of my songs from my close friends. I've written I think eight(or nine) songs over the past year and a half, and the majority of them are about love troubles(obviously). I never really knew if the lyrics were ever adaquete enough for the public(haha). Personally I think they could definitely use some work. I record my music and upload it to my music myspace(i know, pretty unofficial), where I don't really get many plays, considering I don't advertise at all. I'm asking that you can listen to the songs I have and give me some feedback? It'd be greatly appreciated, and I really want to improve. Thanks to everyone who lets me know what they think about the guitar parts as well as the lyrics. Later, Daniel

01-14-2010, 01:36 PM	#2 (permalink)
Urban Hat€monger ? The Sexual Intellectual Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Somewhere cooler than you Posts: 18,605	This forum is for members to post lyrics & songs Not an excuse for anyone to sign up just to whore out their myspace. __________________ Urb's RYM Stuff Most people sell their soul to the devil, but the devil sells his soul to Nick Cave.