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11-28-2009, 08:52 AM
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DiSTANToblivion - Songs and Poems
The other thread I had got deleted so I'm going to be posting all of my songs and poems again. Hopefully things will be neater this time :P:
So, here we go again... (a poem) The Rose Of May May rests her emerald eyes for a moment in time They open slowly as she weeps Softly, her silent sadness seeps into her heart and into her soul This emotion she can no longer control May lies upon a cold floor as she dreams… Pale snow white skin and a frost filling the air A single red rose nestled within her hand, it’s colour bleeds crimson across the white It’s colour burns long into her night May awakens from her dreamscape For a moment in time, to questions without an clue Buried deep and building into blue into her thoughts and into her mind These dreams that always leave her blind May clutches her red rose, tightly pressed against her naked stomach Scared… One red rose continues to bleed there May feels no comfort as she bears the pain May feels nothing more, not the cold frost or the burning flame Last edited by DiSTANToblivion; 12-28-2009 at 07:14 AM. |
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12-28-2009, 07:13 AM
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Solitary
I sit uncompromising and jaded Seeking company, a way to fight this loneliness Only to see those I told, I hated Waiting for someone… Someone to fill the vacant space beside me Move my fingers along and across the empty seat sitting here for too long… and I am turning to stone In my defeat This sole, lonely need, has overtaken me If only I could turn to see I cannot move at all Someone sits next to me As they cry out their soul They want company They need somebody a way to fight this loneliness All I can do is listen, as lonely as they are, as long as the stone man sits As long as they can bear it They just need someone to listen |
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12-28-2009, 07:15 AM
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The Further The Distance
He walks alone at night, through the cold He is unstable The street sign in disguise and the road reflects He takes it all tonight, unwillingly He is unstable tonight The signs point to him and aim Still, this night remains He sleeps on damp ground, he drinks to silence the sound, to drown the voices, to end it all tonight.. He wakes alone today, mourning still cold and he is still grey He left it all last night Serenity sold, he was nameless last night He walks In the morning glow, he walks… to forget his father, to stop his words To escape forever... Now he runs, from the past, he runs… to live for a future, to start anew Into a new day Into a new light |
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12-28-2009, 08:21 PM
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Bridging The Gapless Mind
- INTRO - You drain me of all that I have learnt and I am burning in silence So take me away... Same old tired excuses So sick, of being like this Same words you will always speak them So take me away... - VERSE 1 - Away... I walk, astray (Away) I start today... In peace I feel the pain In love I feel the strain and I know this feeling now I know this feeling - CHORUS 1 - All that You have done All that You will do All of this anger, built from inside you All of these pages From which you taught me Are all of the pages That will now haunt me - VERSE 2 - Insane... I slip away (Insane) I've fallen today... No cover from all this rain No shelter from all it stains and I know this meaning now I know the meaning... - CHORUS 1 - - CHORUS 2 - All that You have done All that You will do All of this anger I'm the voice inside you All of these pages That will now haunt me Are all of the pages That have been brought to me - BRIDGE - I'm lost... I don't know who I am I've drained me of all that I have learnt and I have been burnt in silence So tired of making excuses Same words and different meanings still speaking, these words These words... - CHORUS 3 - (x3) All that you have done All that you will do All of this anger I'm the voice inside you All of these pages (torn from under) That will now haunt me Are all of the pages (torn asunder) That have been brought to me - OUTRO - ...and I'm lost now far from who I was and I never lived a moment So tired of all the excuses The same words with different meanings still speaking, these words These words... |
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12-28-2009, 08:24 PM
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Pure Faith
- INTRO - The Fixtures Painted... (pained with black) The Figures Moving... (turned your back) - VERSE 1 - You've got a 'Pure Faith' in the unknown I'd like to tell you, but you don't know You're losing what (you make-believe...) I'd like to show you, but you wont see - CHORUS 1 - Yesterday called again tomorrow... too long, too long You hold your head and pray to... your God, your God and damn you for believing... it's wrong, it's wrong So don't hold their hand and say... Dear Lord Dear Lord - VERSE 2 - So about this... (Pure Faith in the Unknown) There's no miracle... (now I've been told) I'll tell you You wont see This can't be happening... Right in front of me... - CHORUS 2 - Yesterday called again tomorrow... too long, too long You hold your head and pray to... your God, your God and damn you for believing... it's wrong, it's wrong So don't hold their hand and say... Dear Lord Dear Lord... Yesterday called again tomorrow... Today Too Late... To hold His hand and say Dear Lord, Dear Lord Damn you for believing... anymore Damn you for believing... anymore So don't hold my hand and say... You're God... You're God... (my God..) - BRIDGE - (my God... my God...) What are we doing? Where are we going? Things we keep saying We aren't knowing My God My God... Where are you going? What are you doing? Things you're saying I never hear you anymore... ...anymore - CHORUS 2 - - VERSE 3 / OUTRO - You've got a Pure Faith in the Unknown I'd like to show you but you now know I wont tell you what you now see... The Fixtures Fading... (fell in black) The Figures Leaving... (call them back) |
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12-30-2009, 04:24 AM
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Awake Without Sleep
- VERSE 1 - Wake up blind, born again deaf Yet you see the signs and hear those names Will you ever find The truth and what it is? An alibi… fit for your mistakes Your pathway crossed upon this broken home Of hollow hearts and empty beds This cold dark room It stains your mind and all that’s left… Is left behind Now it’s turning over again Now it’s turning over again It’s turning over again… - CHORUS 1 - and you cant breathe now They’re pulling the curtain closed It’s the last time, the final call to rise… This is the last time they place this pain within your eyes You can’t breathe now They’re leaving this open door It’s the last time, the final call to rise… This is the last time they live their life inside your mind - VERSE 2 - Wake up lost, left again dead now you fear the signs and scream those names Will you ever stop and think for once and all Or will your thoughts be never yours? Now it’s turning over again Now it’s turning over again It’s turning over again… - CHORUS 1 - - BRIDGE - What is turning you away? Now you’re turning over again… What is turning you away? Now you’re turning over again… What is turning you away? Now you’re turning over again… What is turning you away? Now you’re turning over again… It’s turning over again… - CHORUS 2 - (x2) and you feel free now You’ve torn the curtain down It’s the last time, the final call to rise… This is the last time they place this pain within your eyes You feel free now You’re walking through the open door It’s the last time, the final call to rise… This is the last time they live their life inside your mind |
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01-08-2010, 06:06 PM
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I find songs about faith issues interesting, and so would like to learn what "the fixtures fading (fell in black)" and "the figures leaving (call them back)" mean. I understand the basic idea of the song as being that the singer feels the woman who believes in god is wrong...but perhaps the singer feels the woman is losing her faith and can't help her? I can't tell the viewpoints of the singer, but would like to. Also, what is it that the singer "can't believe ... is happening?" I like the line, "You've got a Pure Faith in the Unknown" because that, for me, summarizes what religion is...except that those who are religious feel the "unknown" is known. I'm confused by all the different time references. You make frequent references to time in the song, so I know it must be important, but I'm not sure why: Quote:
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01-21-2010, 08:48 AM
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This mist, the fever and its embrace,
mind easing in its calm retrace This tale lies Woven within, seeping through, it begins… It ends with you This mist, a comfort now replaced Dismiss, to enter this saving grace Your dream, the story unfolds ^^^ wish i could finish this. |
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