APCTOOL91

Hey everyone this is a song I've been working on under my project name, "Dreamin' of Foxglove." Its called "What I Have Become" and its about some depression and other issues I had a couple years ago. Please comment I really enjoy constructive criticism and just comments thanks.

We are free like the energy that surrounds us now
Breathing life in as we slowly, slowly start to progress
Revive me to let me breathe again
Rejuvenate me so I can start without my sins

I’m feeling down
But I know what I will be tomorrow
Another slave to the countless dependency I’m on
Cuz I’m just too deep to get back up again

(chorus)
So here I am!
Heal me now!
Come down and save me now
If you are real, then save my soul from what I have become!

I am too out of it
To comprehend where to begin
So where I am, is where I’ll always be
In a Hell of what I have become!

And so I must start again (x4)

Test after test
I’ll lose my faith
Down on my knees slave to my own enemy
I know I will lose this battle again

And so I must start again
New body, new skin
Cut away what I am
Loose all of this fake, mirrored images

(chorus)
So here I am!
Heal me now!
Come down and save me now
If you are real, then save my soul from what I have become!

So go ahead “God” save from me myself
Strike me down
Cuz I cannot be saved
Because I don’t wanna be a burden anymore