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10-03-2009, 12:57 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Some stuff from me to you,skank!
A little background on this,I live in a bad area.This is all sh*t that ive seen and heard yada yada yada.I was thinking of changin the chorus,it seems kinda bitc*y and whiny,let me know.
Ps. Ill be moving out of this sh*t hole soon.Hopefully LOL I woke up from my dream and into this nightmare by the shots fired and the sound of screeching tires. Dreams? We've all got em. Mine just seem lost and forgotten. I want out I want out f*ck surviving and living without <--chorus,i guess peace of mind peace of mind It feels imposible to find. Life in the beat down *****y part of town candles and flowers lying on the ground a place I call the land of the lost surviving a hail of bullets,but at what cost? living in a world where there is no change children and mothers are going insane. What the hell, did they kill someone else? I guess lead in your diet is not good for your health. Death here, death where? Nobody saw a thing. (<--sarcastic) Once found and not blind but they just cant see. |
10-11-2009, 12:33 PM | #2 (permalink) |
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Got a few things I was writing the other night when fighting with "THE CHIC"!.Sorry if you think its cliche or this or that,but its exactly what I felt and what I was feeling.It all came natural.
Its bad enough I have to fight the demons that nest in my brain but now I have to put up with your crying This sh*t is driving me insane The world feels like it tumbles down It rests on my shoulders thats how it feels,thats what it is Apparently your my everything and yet I want you to be as far away as possible. Just let me think,let the words come out of my mouth before you give me sh*t for what im about to say Someone must really hate me and planned this against me Hopefully karma gave him what he gave me. Fu** me looks like I already did. Hahaha
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10-11-2009, 12:45 PM | #3 (permalink) |
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Tomorrow will be another day
tonight will be a blur Lets make this feeling last Give me something that will wake me up something that will make me forget Dont know what that is,but looks like its good. Smoke this swallow that I really dont care,its all the same I'll let you know how it felt,if I awake This self destruct kind of mentality is amazing you are my everything and yet you make me want to forget everything
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10-12-2009, 02:13 PM | #5 (permalink) |
"Hermione-Lite"
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Geh. I'm sorry all of this is going on. I'm not a fan of the writing style, but it's from the heart so I can't really criticize.
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10-12-2009, 04:45 PM | #7 (permalink) |
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Dont be sorry,we're cool now.Its kinda a good thing,its fueled my creativity level a lot.Most of my stuff is in spanish,I just started writing in english a few weeks ago.Ill be getting better little by little ,hopefully.
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10-12-2009, 05:30 PM | #8 (permalink) |
"Hermione-Lite"
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Ohh, it'll be exciting to see you progressing.
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10-12-2009, 07:46 PM | #10 (permalink) |
"Hermione-Lite"
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Yeah, I play a couple. Do you? xD
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