Slime

Its_Ricey · 09-13-2009, 04:35 PM

Slime

Lifestyle of a dirty rat
secretly a dressed-up man
wanting everything he can't have
converting the rest,

Unsuspected by all
secretly wondered and awe'd
energized and frenzied
by commitment issues

I wont lose
what i have against you
move on move out
its gonna be a bloodbath

You dont understand
your crime
selfish,uncaring
your slime

Paths Jaded and ruined
secretly undone
waiting for comprising
money for your depression

laughing medicine
covers lies told to stay on top
looking for a photo finish
youve been caught (out)

I wont Lose
i what i have against you
move on move out
Its starting a crisis

you dont understand
your crime
decieving,devilsh
your Slime

You want out
of it
of what
your life is just a pit

you want out
of this
of your
life is a pit

your crime
so a wrong but you think its right
Your slime
of highest calibur

I wont lose
what i have against you
move on move out
you can here the sirens blazing, blaring out

You dont understand
your crime
****y,dirty
your slime

Not that good,But i thought id just put it up here...

Arya Stark · 09-16-2009, 01:26 AM

I like it, I really do.

I'm curious as to why you posted this poem.

What is it about?
When did you write it?
Is it a song or just a poem?
Is it a rap, maybe?

I'd love to learn more.
And also some more about why you capatilized some words randomly, while others stayed lowercased.

Please help. [[=

09-13-2009, 04:35 PM	#1 (permalink)
Its_Ricey Groupie Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Ireland Posts: 1	Slime Slime Lifestyle of a dirty rat secretly a dressed-up man wanting everything he can't have converting the rest, Unsuspected by all secretly wondered and awe'd energized and frenzied by commitment issues I wont lose what i have against you move on move out its gonna be a bloodbath You dont understand your crime selfish,uncaring your slime Paths Jaded and ruined secretly undone waiting for comprising money for your depression laughing medicine covers lies told to stay on top looking for a photo finish youve been caught (out) I wont Lose i what i have against you move on move out Its starting a crisis you dont understand your crime decieving,devilsh your Slime You want out of it of what your life is just a pit you want out of this of your life is a pit your crime so a wrong but you think its right Your slime of highest calibur I wont lose what i have against you move on move out you can here the sirens blazing, blaring out You dont understand your crime ****y,dirty your slime Not that good,But i thought id just put it up here...