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Old 09-22-2009, 06:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Ricochet~kun View Post
(held, screamed so that the microphone distorts)
I said i'm breakin' down,
got no more thinkin' mind to compromise~
Just this line seems a bit akward to me, try changing that one up if you can, man. I sang the lyrics, kinda pictured their "voice", they sound good vocalized. Good work.
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