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Old 09-23-2009, 09:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Red face Hey guys I need help with a songtitle!

Hey. So I'm a beginner at writing songs, and I'm just trying this out, but tell me what you think okay? It doesnt have a full melody yet, but I think I'm going to make it country, something like Taylor Swift's song. Oh and I need help with the song title too. Thanks!

Sitting here all alone
My best friend just went home
And I'm, Waiting for you now

I just wanted to say hi
And receiving your reply
Saying, I am fine.

But what am I hoping?
What am I faking?
Who am kidding?
I'm not supposed to feel this feeling

[CHORUS]
Now its all mixed up
And I'm just so confused
I wanted to cry but I dont know why
And now I'm missing you
Why does it feels so true
When I know you wont feel the same too
You know I'm just another girl who screams
I love you

Martin's singing a love song
and Taylor follows the lead
Somehow, its about you and me

But I'm not telling anybody
They just won't understand
Dont wanna be laughed at again

But what am I hoping?
What am I faking?
Who am kidding?
I'm not supposed to feel this feeling

[CHORUS]

Tried to be real and moved on
But when I look into his eyes sometings just wrong
My heart just wont sing
The words just wont fit in

and I always dream of your eyes
Your brunette locks and your flawless smile
But I know you wont be mine

Its late but I couldnt sleep
Cuz I am so confused
And please just tell me why am I crying
Maybe I'm missing you
And this feeling feels so true
But I know you wont feel the same too
Cuz I'm just another girl among the crowds
One of the girls who are trying to reach out
And hoping you would come and say
I love you..too

Comments/Advice? I'd love to know it!
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