song i wrote. tell me what you think?

[cass143]

well im sort of new at this but do tell me what you think ;D

im watching you disappear
but before you go, you should know
im sort of in love with you

i want to forget you
i want to remember you
but even if i never see you again

i can still hope that youll show up
i can still replay those memories
i can still wonder what could have been

its only been a day but i miss you
wish there was a way you could miss me too
i know it wont happen to me
but i can still dream

i hear you playing guitar
i want to smile, i want to cry
i cant do either, it would give me away

i need to forget
i need to remember
and even if i never see you again

i can still hope that you'll show up
i can still replay those memories
i can still wonder what could have been

its only been a day but i miss you
wish there was a way you could miss me too
i know it wont happen to me

yesterday i came home crying
knowing that impossible wasn't changing
for me

but i can still dream