Under The Hole

tanner99 · 07-23-2009, 01:59 AM

You could never guess what was down there under the hole.
I went under and found out myself.

Under the hole is a world that you can’t believe
It’s a world full of evil
A world full of magic
A world full of hate

You could never guess what was down there under the hole.
You could never guess what was down there under the hole.
You could never guess what was down there under the hole.

The fall was long.
The fall was painful.
The fall brought me to an amazing world.

Giant trolls
Dark wizards
Little gnomes
Castles made of bones
Darker then the eyes of the Devil
All down under the hole

The underworld is planning to revolt against us
The underworld is planning to revolt against us
The underworld is planning to revolt against us
The underworld is planning to revolt against us

They have their magic and we have our bullets
They have their magic and we have our bullets

They will win and we will die
It’s about time.

They want to see the Sun
And they want to us to go down

You could never guess what was down there under the hole.
You could never guess what was down there under the hole.
You could never guess what was down there under the hole.

I'm still thinking of adding more stuff. This is a metal-ish song with distortion guitar and bass. Any comments will be appreciated.

Shivs · 07-23-2009, 01:30 PM

Ahhh...develop it more, I think.

half drag · 07-23-2009, 01:31 PM

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Originally Posted by tanner99

Giant trolls
Dark wizards
Little gnomes
Castles made of bones

I like that bit!

tanner99 · 07-23-2009, 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shivs

Ahhh...develop it more, I think.

yeah i know, but i have kind of a mental block on the song lol

tanner99 · 07-24-2009, 03:45 AM

lol any other opinions/suggestions?

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 07-27-2009, 05:41 PM

It's pretty cliche. Would work in a Lightning Bolt song or with a parody metal band like Tenacious D. Interesting concept though.

right-track · 07-27-2009, 06:16 PM

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Originally Posted by tanner99

lol any other opinions/suggestions?

Stop!

07-23-2009, 01:59 AM	#1 (permalink)
tanner99 Groupie Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 14	Under The Hole You could never guess what was down there under the hole. I went under and found out myself. Under the hole is a world that you can’t believe It’s a world full of evil A world full of magic A world full of hate You could never guess what was down there under the hole. You could never guess what was down there under the hole. You could never guess what was down there under the hole. The fall was long. The fall was painful. The fall brought me to an amazing world. Giant trolls Dark wizards Little gnomes Castles made of bones Darker then the eyes of the Devil All down under the hole The underworld is planning to revolt against us The underworld is planning to revolt against us The underworld is planning to revolt against us The underworld is planning to revolt against us They have their magic and we have our bullets They have their magic and we have our bullets They will win and we will die It’s about time. They want to see the Sun And they want to us to go down You could never guess what was down there under the hole. You could never guess what was down there under the hole. You could never guess what was down there under the hole. I'm still thinking of adding more stuff. This is a metal-ish song with distortion guitar and bass. Any comments will be appreciated.

07-23-2009, 01:30 PM	#2 (permalink)
Shivs Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 62	Ahhh...develop it more, I think.

07-24-2009, 03:45 AM	#5 (permalink)
tanner99 Groupie Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 14	lol any other opinions/suggestions?

07-27-2009, 05:41 PM	#6 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	It's pretty cliche. Would work in a Lightning Bolt song or with a parody metal band like Tenacious D. Interesting concept though.