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Old 07-07-2009, 10:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default I'm trying to get my song lyrics noticed. Please tell me what you think. Thank you:)

Song title: This Feeling.

Why does everything seem so difficult? Why do things have to be so hard? Can't we just fall in love and get it over with? Please stop playing with my heart..
(verse 1)
I want you to know, the feeling I get when I'm around you.
I want you to see, the real me, not the one hiding.
But it always seems so hard, to be myself when I'm around you now. Yeah...
(chorus)
Heart racing, as fast as the light.
Face turning, as red as a rose.
Voice shaking, this can't be right.
What is this feeling? Does anyone know?
(verse 2)
It's so hard to see, if you feel the same way I feel about you.
Can you tell me now? I can't wait any longer.
Why don't you show, the same emotions I show around you?
Does that mean..something else? I need to know...
(chorus)
Heart racing, as fast as the light.
Face turning, as red as a rose.
Voice shaking, this can't be right.
What is this feeling? Does anyone know?
Hands trembling, as you go to reach for them.
Mind telling, me not to move.
I wanna stay here, forever and ever.
What is this feeling? Does anyone know?

And why...does it only happen with you?
If it's just a crush, why haven't I felt this way before?
I can't take it, much longer. I need a sign, I need some hope.
I need someone, to tell me, not to give up, no....
(chorus)
Heart racing, as fast as the light.
Face turning, as red as a rose.
Voice shaking, this can't be right.
What is this feeling? Does anyone know?
Hands trembling, as you go to reach for them.
Mind telling, me not to move.
I wanna stay here, forever and ever.
What is this feeling? Does anyone know?
.............
Here you are, sitting right next to me.
I feel the feeling, coming on.
I wanna tell you oh so badly,
but how do I tell you what I don't even know?
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