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07-18-2009, 08:48 PM
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we are stardust
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 You seriously want an mp3? I will PM one to you if you really are interested  EDIT: Okay I've got an mp3 version with heaps more sound editing/ cleaned up/ etc if anyone's interested.
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07-20-2009, 05:56 PM
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"Hermione-Lite"
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I've been wondering where you are... ;;
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09-12-2009, 04:38 AM
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we are stardust
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This one doesn't have a name, so feel free to suggest one if you can think of one.
I'm overlooking/ the street we used to live The lofty gum trees/ they always forgive Birthday parties and broken bones You left me here with too many unknowns Im overlooking/ the beach that we called ours Searing summers/ lying on our towels Bright blue ocean and golden sand A love affair with this sunburned land You said goodbye you left you went away Would I be different if you were still here today You said goodbye you left you went away But Im still here I chose to stay Im overlooking/ the photos in my head Backyard cricket/ six if you hit the shed Football socks and smiling faces How could you leave, of all places You said goodbye you left you went away Would I be different if you were still here today You said goodbye you left you went away But Im still here I chose to stay I was only seventeen Sneaking out of windows, caught by the fly screen Do you miss the sun the sea But most of all... do you miss me? You said goodbye you left you went away Would I be different if you were still here today You said goodbye you left you went away But Im still here I chose to stay You said goodbye you left you went away Would I be different if you were still here today? And here's a slightly crappy recording of it, although this was recorded quite a while ago: It's a bit lame and sappy I must admit! Edit: Sorry the vocals are so quiet, that's what you get when you're just using the in-built mic in your computer!
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09-12-2009, 09:38 PM
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"Hermione-Lite"
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I love it, I really do.
But there's one thing that I can't put my finger on just yet that I think should change. I will let you know as soon as possible. Beautiful. <3
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09-12-2009, 09:45 PM
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VICTORY SCREEEEEEECH
Join Date: Mar 2009
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not bad, but could you turn up the vocals a bit? i can barely hear them.
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09-12-2009, 10:20 PM
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09-12-2009, 10:38 PM
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carpe musicam
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Lateralus, Nice song. The vocals might be as loud as you like but the tone of the recording is good.
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09-13-2009, 03:35 AM
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Registered Jimmy Rustler
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Just a tip in response to that last video: I dont know if you normally do it but try just fingerpicking/strumming. Not just for more control of the sound but it'll make it warmer and quieter so your vocals will appear louder.
Very good though, I enjoyed it.
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