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06-12-2009, 08:09 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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Clay's First Song
Title: Unititled
Artist: Clay I admire your walk Amazed when you talk Everything you say Takes my breath away All the things you do When you don't mean to It drives me all the way back to you [Chorus] I've come so far It's been so hard Not being able to walk with you Not being able to talk to you ---> (Kind of like an echo) Not being able to see you smile Its been such a long while Since I've been happy at all.. You have no idea How much you cross my mind Just thinking about you Gives me a feeling inside I can't explain it How it makes me feel It kinda makes me think That this might be real.. [Chorus] The light in your eyes Is where the truth lies You try to hide the pain But you can't help but cry.. You sit and wonder why Everyone says goodbye Why the world is so unfair And that you want to die.. But don't despair There's someone there Someone to love you And to take care Of all the things That trouble you To throw away the past And see the world anew.. [Chorus] Hope you like it, let me know what you think. Be honest, I'm open to ALL criticism. (This was made for an Acoustic type of Genre) The lyrics are not completely done, I'm looking to add one or two more verses. |