Foo Fighting's Collection

FooFighting · 06-06-2009, 11:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lightStevOo

????
wats the point of this???

yeah I didnt mean for all my songs to go like this.
I made them all seperated and then they all merged to one...
im as confused as you are!

Urban Hat€monger ? · 06-06-2009, 11:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FooFighting

yeah I didnt mean for all my songs to go like this.
I made them all seperated and then they all merged to one...
im as confused as you are!

Because that's how things are posted in this forum.

There's a thread at the top of the page saying ' READ THIS THREAD BEFORE YOU POST ANYTHING HERE'

I also gave you the link to it earlier in this thread if you are in any doubt.

FooFighting · 09-23-2009, 10:05 AM

Riverbank

Sitting on the riverbank
Watching the sun
Only just a year ago
I found the one

The hot summer of last year
My feet in the sand
Frying in the burning light
You gave me your hand

We moved under the big tree
And into the shade
Talking, laughing, then I asked
To tell me your name

You hesitated shortly
Then opened your mouth
It moved like it was talking
But there was no sound

"Why so mysterious"
I asked quizzically
But you'd already run off
Away from me

A lonely month followed
I was so bored
But when Autumn came
To the riverside I returned

That day I found you under
The big shady tree
That a month ago had kept the
Sun away from me

You seemed different
Quiet, sad, and scared
When you sat down with me
You stopped acting so weird

We talked, laughed, and then I said
"I still don't know your name"
You didn't answer no
But you did something great

Leaning over on the leaves
You stared in to my eyes
A smile spread across your face
I forgot all your lies

You lips brushed mine, tenderly, lovingly
My eyes closed in delight
I'd never ever felt so good
I'd never felt so bright

We sat under the big old tree
Until the sun set
A cloud rolled over the sky above
And suddenly we were wet

We ran home as fast as we could
I welcomed him through the door
But he refused suddenly
And ran home with no more

Until that day a year ago
I've not seen you once
We only met each other twice
But it felt like months and months

So now I sit at the riverbank
The blaring sun up high
I think of the unnamed man
And heave a great big sigh

One more time I'd like to see
The one perfect man
But the riverbank lay lone and bare
Except for the land

I sit there with my memories
I wish you were there
A sound crackles in my ear
I turn around in fear

A figure rises through the trees
A brilliant thought takes over me
I shift happily in the sand
As you hold out your hand

You take me to the shady tree
You put your arms around me
Your tender lips brush mine
I feel so damn fine

A smile grows upon your face
Your mouth opens to say
"My name is still unkown to you
It will still be a mystery too"

"So what about a nickname?
You can pick it- it's a game"
I think a sec and then I whisper
"Hi, my best friend ever, River!"

- I wrote the first 3 or 4 lines on a piece of paper, but the rest was written while on Banter- so it gets a bit crap and corny, including the last line. Sorry-

Arya Stark · 09-23-2009, 10:12 AM

You shouldn't have posted it twice, I didn't realize you had a collection already.

FooFighting · 09-25-2009, 06:21 AM

One Last Glance

It's been one thousand years
Since I last saw your face.
I've shed one thousand tears
And I've shed my grace.

Five hundred years more
I would stand.
If it could mean
Just one more glance.

Arya Stark · 09-26-2009, 10:48 PM

Quote:

I've shed one thousand tears
And I've shed my grace.

Five hundred years more
I would stand.

The lines that I didn't quote sound too clichè for me to really be affected by it.

I like those four lines I quoted, though.

FooFighting · 09-27-2009, 11:41 PM

Thanks for the feedback AwwSugar- keep it up.

Arya Stark · 09-27-2009, 11:49 PM

Keep up the feedback? xD

FooFighting · 09-28-2009, 12:25 AM

Yep

- I see you're commenting on a lot of peoples songs. Youre doing a good job

FooFighting · 09-28-2009, 01:18 AM

Red sails in the sunrise
And everybody opens up their eyes.

-Don't even bother with this rhyme. I got it from a news headline about the mist that covered Sydney Harbour in Australia last week. It's just here for the sake of it-

09-23-2009, 10:05 AM	#13 (permalink)
FooFighting Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 61	Riverbank Sitting on the riverbank Watching the sun Only just a year ago I found the one The hot summer of last year My feet in the sand Frying in the burning light You gave me your hand We moved under the big tree And into the shade Talking, laughing, then I asked To tell me your name You hesitated shortly Then opened your mouth It moved like it was talking But there was no sound "Why so mysterious" I asked quizzically But you'd already run off Away from me A lonely month followed I was so bored But when Autumn came To the riverside I returned That day I found you under The big shady tree That a month ago had kept the Sun away from me You seemed different Quiet, sad, and scared When you sat down with me You stopped acting so weird We talked, laughed, and then I said "I still don't know your name" You didn't answer no But you did something great Leaning over on the leaves You stared in to my eyes A smile spread across your face I forgot all your lies You lips brushed mine, tenderly, lovingly My eyes closed in delight I'd never ever felt so good I'd never felt so bright We sat under the big old tree Until the sun set A cloud rolled over the sky above And suddenly we were wet We ran home as fast as we could I welcomed him through the door But he refused suddenly And ran home with no more Until that day a year ago I've not seen you once We only met each other twice But it felt like months and months So now I sit at the riverbank The blaring sun up high I think of the unnamed man And heave a great big sigh One more time I'd like to see The one perfect man But the riverbank lay lone and bare Except for the land I sit there with my memories I wish you were there A sound crackles in my ear I turn around in fear A figure rises through the trees A brilliant thought takes over me I shift happily in the sand As you hold out your hand You take me to the shady tree You put your arms around me Your tender lips brush mine I feel so damn fine A smile grows upon your face Your mouth opens to say "My name is still unkown to you It will still be a mystery too" "So what about a nickname? You can pick it- it's a game" I think a sec and then I whisper "Hi, my best friend ever, River!" - I wrote the first 3 or 4 lines on a piece of paper, but the rest was written while on Banter- so it gets a bit crap and corny, including the last line. Sorry- Last edited by FooFighting; 09-28-2009 at 12:59 AM.

09-28-2009, 01:18 AM	#20 (permalink)
FooFighting Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 61	Rhyme Red sails in the sunrise And everybody opens up their eyes. -Don't even bother with this rhyme. I got it from a news headline about the mist that covered Sydney Harbour in Australia last week. It's just here for the sake of it-

09-25-2009, 06:21 AM	#15 (permalink)
FooFighting Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 61	One Last Glance It's been one thousand years Since I last saw your face. I've shed one thousand tears And I've shed my grace. Five hundred years more I would stand. If it could mean Just one more glance.

09-27-2009, 11:41 PM	#17 (permalink)
FooFighting Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 61	Thanks for the feedback AwwSugar- keep it up.

09-28-2009, 12:25 AM	#19 (permalink)
FooFighting Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Australia Posts: 61	Yep - I see you're commenting on a lot of peoples songs. Youre doing a good job