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Old 04-30-2009, 09:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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He said it came to me in a vision
I said no, thats a lie
You don't revise the word of God
To fit your ideas of wrong or right

He said I had to misinterpret
I thought I led the world to light
I said look around
Do you see the sun?
Can you even open your eyes?

You're in Hell
You're in Hell
You're in Hell
You're in Hell
And you took everyone down with you
You're in Hell
You're in Hell
You're in Hell
And you took us all down with you


PS: Does it sound like I am trying desperately to be Jethro Tull or something?
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Old 04-30-2009, 09:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Actually it reminded my of Coheed and Cambria.
Maybe too many "your in hell"'s?
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Maybe you're right...
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Old 05-02-2009, 04:06 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Actually, to me, this sounds like something Propagandhi would have written when they first started.
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What genre is this? Punk? Metal? Rock? Hillbilly Flamenco?

The last one was a joke
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What genre is this? Punk? Metal? Rock? Hillbilly Flamenco?

The last one was a joke
oh yes intuition is a wonderful thing
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[QUOTE=Stone Birds;651079]What genre is this? Punk? Metal? Rock? Hillbilly Flamenco?QUOTE]
Uhh, rock with a bit of synths...kinda like Ozzy's "No More Tears". I haven't got music for it yet, but I wrote it with the 80s in mind, and I know its a synth-y song.
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Old 05-03-2009, 09:28 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I was definitely in hell while reading this.
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I just got it. It sounds like i'm trying to be genisis. And i don't even like genesis. *hits self in head with shovel*
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Its painful to be alive
Feels like I'm gonna die
Every time you notice all the stupid things I do

Everyone tastes like they'll get me high,
Glamrock perfection, sugar and dye,
Candy comes before genuine
I bore you because I'm real

(Theres more, but the rest was ghastly.)


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I knw that the Earth revolves around the sun,
And I know I'm not the only one,
In the darkness reachin' for your light,
Ground is shifting, thats what this feels like

Be tough and shine like a diamond 'till you die,
And I don't care, I won't ask why.
My life is mine to waste, and I sure won't hold my breath,
You're numb like a raincloud, an object at best

I know that the Earth revolves around the sun,
I know you're the only thing I really want.
And in the darkness reaching for the light,
Stuck in isolation, is what these days feel like

(I hate this one.)
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