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04-28-2009, 05:55 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Music Addict
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Virginia, USA
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Here Lies The Truthteller (mathcore)
did you turn left or did you turn right
i lost you at the stop sign your car sped up, my car slowed down i fucking chased you all over town if this was an apology i wouldn't be sorry if this was mythology you would be dead there's no reason for you to be on your knees you shouldn't be choking, just giving me head break downs are for the underappreciated unoriginal kids, so why not end this with the unoriginal gig time teller, say hello to Hellen Keller i'm sure she's just dying to read your lies time teller, silence damn Old Yeller this fever is a message (what's it say?) i'll tell you when you shut your eyes. it's cheesy, and random, then again the lyrics don't matter as much since it's spazzy and it's pretty hard to understand shrill screams anyways. well, comment on it now, i guess. |
05-01-2009, 06:17 PM | #2 (permalink) |
"Hermione-Lite"
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What was the inspiration? I'm kind of curious to know.
And are there no capital letters because you want to make the Proper names more noticeable? Or just because? I'm very curious to know the story behind this piece... |
05-02-2009, 01:57 AM | #3 (permalink) | |
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05-02-2009, 03:41 AM | #4 (permalink) | |
Partying on the inside
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Try writing something meaningful and when you scream the lyrics, try making it understandable. It's the least you can do if you want anyone to take you seriously. Otherwise, all we're listening to is something that really doesn't have any value.
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