Stone Birds

in "saviour" or in "white laces"?

sav·iour
   /ˈseɪvyər/ [seyv-yer]
–noun
1.
a person who saves, rescues, or delivers

i wanted to make it obvious that the song wasn't about religeon



"Birds are singing of your pain for ye white laces ye blood hath stained"

i actually like that kind of diction (when i can understand it)

if i made it normal it'd look like this:
"Birds are singing of your pain for your white laces your blood has stained"

it doesn't have the right feel to it for me personally

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