Stone Birds' Songwriting Journal (bass, song, guitar, Bass drum)

Stone Birds · 04-21-2009, 03:05 PM

You got lost in the atmosphere
i fell down in a hole
mystery speaks in tounges
(Need something to rhyme with hole)

Flip the jupiter signs
forget all the bad times
fly on to neptune
cause baby i'll see ya soon

It's All i got so far i need a lot of help. the song is supposed to have a pop-blues sorta feel to it

yvi_poison · 04-21-2009, 03:29 PM

(Need something to rhyme with hole) -- > Soul,whole, stole?

Stone Birds · 04-21-2009, 03:50 PM

You got lost in the atmosphere
i fell down in a hole
mystery speaks in tounges
But my heart you stole

Flip the jupiter signs
forget all the bad times
fly on to neptune
cause baby i'll see ya soon

Does that line work?

yvi_poison · 04-21-2009, 04:06 PM

yes nice

Stone Birds · 04-22-2009, 06:39 AM

Thnx, how are your lyrics goin?

Stone Birds · 05-17-2009, 11:27 AM

Peach Dream

Quickly and endlessly it flows
along the clouds
the trees hang wildly
they whisper wisdom

It was Free
I was free
It was happy
I was happy

My Favorite Peach dream
it killed reality
i heard the colors
and i saw the sounds

04-21-2009, 03:05 PM	#1 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	Universal Breaker You got lost in the atmosphere i fell down in a hole mystery speaks in tounges (Need something to rhyme with hole) Flip the jupiter signs forget all the bad times fly on to neptune cause baby i'll see ya soon It's All i got so far i need a lot of help. the song is supposed to have a pop-blues sorta feel to it

04-21-2009, 03:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	You got lost in the atmosphere i fell down in a hole mystery speaks in tounges But my heart you stole Flip the jupiter signs forget all the bad times fly on to neptune cause baby i'll see ya soon Does that line work?

04-21-2009, 03:29 PM	#2 (permalink)
yvi_poison Groupie Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 21	(Need something to rhyme with hole) -- > Soul,whole, stole?

04-21-2009, 04:06 PM	#4 (permalink)
yvi_poison Groupie Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 21	yes nice

04-22-2009, 06:39 AM	#5 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	Thnx, how are your lyrics goin?

05-17-2009, 11:27 AM	#6 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	Peach Dream Quickly and endlessly it flows along the clouds the trees hang wildly they whisper wisdom It was Free I was free It was happy I was happy My Favorite Peach dream it killed reality i heard the colors and i saw the sounds