Need help ... (genre, song)

yvi_poison · 04-15-2009, 09:23 AM

Im trying to write this song, "confidential"..
What do u think so far???
I am totally stuck:/

Confidential

Keep it to be a secret
between you and me
entrust me again

Living in denial
all you do
One heart in two hearts playing
Keepin´ it confidential
in everlasting denial

You say you dont want to hurt her
what we have is too real
to be lost

condiden-tial-ly be mine
confiden-tial-ly be mine tonight
theres no rules
Confiden-tial-ly mine all mine

Keep it in a fantasy
between distances
hiding away again

You are my mister
I play your mistress
There is only a few rules

~~davidl~~ · 04-18-2009, 02:10 AM

it looks good

do you play any instruments, yvi_poison?

Stone Birds · 04-18-2009, 11:53 AM

I think this is pretty good, but what genre is this and what're the instruments you're gonna use.

yvi_poison · 04-18-2009, 06:37 PM

Hey, i don´t play any instruments, just kind of make up my own melody in head.. So i find it difficult to explain it, but hope to get some help, and im open to work with people

04-15-2009, 09:23 AM	#1 (permalink)
yvi_poison Groupie Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 21	Need help ... Im trying to write this song, "confidential".. What do u think so far??? I am totally stuck:/ Confidential Keep it to be a secret between you and me entrust me again Living in denial all you do One heart in two hearts playing Keepin´ it confidential in everlasting denial You say you dont want to hurt her what we have is too real to be lost condiden-tial-ly be mine confiden-tial-ly be mine tonight theres no rules Confiden-tial-ly mine all mine Keep it in a fantasy between distances hiding away again You are my mister I play your mistress There is only a few rules

04-18-2009, 02:10 AM	#2 (permalink)
~~davidl~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 13	it looks good do you play any instruments, yvi_poison?

04-18-2009, 11:53 AM	#3 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	I think this is pretty good, but what genre is this and what're the instruments you're gonna use.

04-18-2009, 06:37 PM	#4 (permalink)
yvi_poison Groupie Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 21	Hey, i don´t play any instruments, just kind of make up my own melody in head.. So i find it difficult to explain it, but hope to get some help, and im open to work with people