My first songs!! What do you think?

Stone Birds · 04-21-2009, 04:54 PM

i feel like buying this song it's nice and matches my style

suddenly
I hide behind this facade
stars in your eyes is blinding
my illusions

Northernlight
I call on you
attack me above
touch me from above
suffocate the night
Northernlight
Northernlight
Northernlight

In this night I fall in
A grief I cant recall
your hands
my pain

Northernlight
Sense my fear
attack m from above
touch me from nowhere
suffocate the fear
Northernlight
Northernlight
This night

Holding my breath
in this fire
heart losing beats
You say you say
you did

Northernlight
wipe my tears
with this power
touch me from above
Northernlight
Northernlight
tonight
Northernlight you sense
my fear
tonight

Come now to me
Northernlight
attack me free
this last
time

yvi_poison · 04-21-2009, 05:12 PM

Thanks!! if you are interested in any lyrics , don´t hesitate to contact me

Stone Birds · 04-22-2009, 07:46 AM

i'm just wondering what the melody is to it. can you give me a sampl? (Maybe use youtube or somethin)

yvi_poison · 04-22-2009, 03:57 PM

I dont play instruments and find it hard to make a sample, but how you mean use youtube? I have a melody but its in my head

Stone Birds · 04-22-2009, 04:50 PM

just take a video or soemthing of it being sung.

Naked · 04-22-2009, 07:05 PM

-ragnemusi · 01-09-2010, 08:27 PM

woow. love them , girl , yaah , you got talent

ACDCfan94 · 01-14-2010, 01:26 PM

Hey! You are super talented. loved it!

t3hplatyz0rz · 01-16-2010, 09:17 AM

It's really, really good. One thing I think, though, is that it's a little too dark for my tastes. Maybe you could try putting it to some relaxed reggae to lighten up the mood? (jk)

I don't get the point of "Northernlight". As with all your stuff, it's very poetic, but I don't really know what it's about. It's good to have mystery, and it's good to have clarity, but you need more clarity and less mystery in that song.

Also, remember, you have a talent, but it takes more than that. You also have to remember to not let the people who say "rubbish and that's being generous" let you down too much. You just can't please everybody.

BillyShears · 01-20-2010, 03:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by moondust

rubbish and thats being generous

put up you're lyrics then, turkey.

04-21-2009, 04:54 PM	#21 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	i feel like buying this song it's nice and matches my style suddenly I hide behind this facade stars in your eyes is blinding my illusions Northernlight I call on you attack me above touch me from above suffocate the night Northernlight Northernlight Northernlight In this night I fall in A grief I cant recall your hands my pain Northernlight Sense my fear attack m from above touch me from nowhere suffocate the fear Northernlight Northernlight This night Holding my breath in this fire heart losing beats You say you say you did Northernlight wipe my tears with this power touch me from above Northernlight Northernlight tonight Northernlight you sense my fear tonight Come now to me Northernlight attack me free this last time

01-14-2010, 01:26 PM	#28 (permalink)
ACDCfan94 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada Posts: 3	Amazing Hey! You are super talented. loved it! __________________ Rebecca

04-21-2009, 05:12 PM	#22 (permalink)
yvi_poison Groupie Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 21	Thanks!! if you are interested in any lyrics , don´t hesitate to contact me

04-22-2009, 07:46 AM	#23 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	i'm just wondering what the melody is to it. can you give me a sampl? (Maybe use youtube or somethin)

04-22-2009, 03:57 PM	#24 (permalink)
yvi_poison Groupie Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 21	I dont play instruments and find it hard to make a sample, but how you mean use youtube? I have a melody but its in my head

04-22-2009, 04:50 PM	#25 (permalink)
Stone Birds myspace.com/stonebirdies Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Conor Oberst Was/is Here Posts: 1,401	just take a video or soemthing of it being sung.

04-22-2009, 07:05 PM	#26 (permalink)
Naked Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 48

01-09-2010, 08:27 PM	#27 (permalink)
-ragnemusi Groupie Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Estonia Posts: 1	woow. love them , girl , yaah , you got talent

01-16-2010, 09:17 AM	#29 (permalink)
t3hplatyz0rz Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: In the moment Posts: 102	It's really, really good. One thing I think, though, is that it's a little too dark for my tastes. Maybe you could try putting it to some relaxed reggae to lighten up the mood? (jk) I don't get the point of "Northernlight". As with all your stuff, it's very poetic, but I don't really know what it's about. It's good to have mystery, and it's good to have clarity, but you need more clarity and less mystery in that song. Also, remember, you have a talent, but it takes more than that. You also have to remember to not let the people who say "rubbish and that's being generous" let you down too much. You just can't please everybody.