Thinking (quote, song)

Jadix · 03-08-2009, 06:22 PM

Girl you've got me thinking
but mostly got me drinking
and i haven't been this thirsty in a week

I named my whiskey Selby
and ill call you Aileen
i wish you both would let me rest in peace

[CHORUS]
Theres only one thing i can do
When you leave me so confused
Im drinking about thinking about you
[/CHORUS]

Well i waited for your call
and drank all my alcohol
so now im out of everything i need

I wish you'd stop this torture
i never met a woman colder
at least Selby puts a blanket over me.

[CHORUS]

I was waiting for your call
and drank all my alcohol
so now im out of everything i need

Schizotypic · 03-09-2009, 01:07 AM

Sad, you should move on.

Jadix · 03-13-2009, 08:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Schizotypic

Sad, you should move on.

thanks, but i wasnt really lookin for relationship advice

Arya Stark · 03-14-2009, 12:11 PM

I'm going to make notes as I read.

The first two lines have already thrown me off.

It's very cliche...

I like the second stanza. Is this a song or a poem?

Overall, it's alright.

I wasn't particularly impressed.

And it would be nice to insert correct grammar and punctuation.

03-08-2009, 06:22 PM	#1 (permalink)
Jadix infamous nimbus Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 140	Thinking Girl you've got me thinking but mostly got me drinking and i haven't been this thirsty in a week I named my whiskey Selby and ill call you Aileen i wish you both would let me rest in peace [CHORUS] Theres only one thing i can do When you leave me so confused Im drinking about thinking about you [/CHORUS] Well i waited for your call and drank all my alcohol so now im out of everything i need I wish you'd stop this torture i never met a woman colder at least Selby puts a blanket over me. [CHORUS] I was waiting for your call and drank all my alcohol so now im out of everything i need Last edited by Jadix; 03-13-2009 at 08:42 PM.

03-09-2009, 01:07 AM	#2 (permalink)
Schizotypic Souls of Sound Sailors Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Mojave Posts: 759	Sad, you should move on.

03-14-2009, 12:11 PM	#4 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	I'm going to make notes as I read. The first two lines have already thrown me off. It's very cliche... I like the second stanza. Is this a song or a poem? Overall, it's alright. I wasn't particularly impressed. And it would be nice to insert correct grammar and punctuation.