coryallen2's Songwriting Journal (singer, band, song)

~~coryallen2~~ · 02-26-2009, 07:35 AM

ok i was thinking of for my band im a screamer and i want to do something NOBODY has done i mean NOOOOOBODYYYY so i was in school the other day and i heard this girl sining like the R&B singers sing like you know how that is i was thinking start off a song real slow and quite with her singing then me in the back ground doing a screaming voice over...then just all hell screams and double kicks everywhere....idk but i think that would sound really really cool and i don't think anyone has done this before...any comments?

Shoe · 02-26-2009, 09:20 PM

Brokencyde did it in their song I'm Sorry I Am.... It sounded like first rate dog ****.

~~coryallen2~~ · 02-27-2009, 07:02 AM

ok...brokencyde are you serious im not talking about scene kid bull shxt

mr dave · 02-27-2009, 04:22 PM

if you're concerned about not being part of 'scene kid BS' then you're letting that same scene BS control your tastes. indirect attention is still attention.

~~coryallen2~~ · 03-24-2009, 07:28 AM

Dreams torn to pieces, broken like glass
Hope faded away, withered like leaves
Not knowing is blessing, ignorance the only protection

(chorus x1)

Nothing is numbing my pain
The fragments of my faith
Became the blade in my hand
Just darkness my eyes see
Pushed me to the end of all dead-end-streets

A curse - cannot lie to myself
I'm doomed - cannot silence my heart
Fear is the tool, conformity our medicine

(chorus x1)

How can I smile as this age dies, like everybody else
Dancing around the fire, that burns this world

(chorus x1)

Cannot bend down, I would just break
I hate myself for playing their game
Parents poison their children, never teach them to question
If it only wasn't for this certainty in me
I am a giant in their tiny world

^^best ever

adidasss · 03-24-2009, 08:08 AM

I take it you're an angsty teen?

~~coryallen2~~ · 03-24-2009, 08:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adidasss

I take it you're an angsty teen?

nahhhhhhh actually im a very happy person

adidasss · 03-24-2009, 08:32 AM

Then what could you possibly find so alluring about these lyrics? Could you maybe go into your feelings about them a bit further instead of just posting them with no reference to where they come from or an actual elaboration as to why we should pay attention to them? What was your intention with making this thread? Why did you put it in the general forums? Etc etc...

~~coryallen2~~ · 03-24-2009, 08:34 AM

first off because it has to do with music in "genral" and if there is a lyrics thred please direct me in that area please.

adidasss · 03-24-2009, 08:42 AM

Well, that answers one of my questions. So, what about "numbing the pain" makes it the "best ever"? Is there some pain you need numbing? Having you tried aspirin? Or is it something more deep, something that hurts your adolescent soul? Tell us more about this "pain" of yours, mm?

02-26-2009, 07:35 AM	#1 (permalink)
~~coryallen2~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: lorain,ohio Posts: 909	coryallen2's Songwriting Journal ok i was thinking of for my band im a screamer and i want to do something NOBODY has done i mean NOOOOOBODYYYY so i was in school the other day and i heard this girl sining like the R&B singers sing like you know how that is i was thinking start off a song real slow and quite with her singing then me in the back ground doing a screaming voice over...then just all hell screams and double kicks everywhere....idk but i think that would sound really really cool and i don't think anyone has done this before...any comments?

03-24-2009, 07:28 AM	#5 (permalink)
~~coryallen2~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: lorain,ohio Posts: 909	numbing the pain Dreams torn to pieces, broken like glass Hope faded away, withered like leaves Not knowing is blessing, ignorance the only protection (chorus x1) Nothing is numbing my pain The fragments of my faith Became the blade in my hand Just darkness my eyes see Pushed me to the end of all dead-end-streets A curse - cannot lie to myself I'm doomed - cannot silence my heart Fear is the tool, conformity our medicine (chorus x1) How can I smile as this age dies, like everybody else Dancing around the fire, that burns this world (chorus x1) Cannot bend down, I would just break I hate myself for playing their game Parents poison their children, never teach them to question If it only wasn't for this certainty in me I am a giant in their tiny world ^^best ever

03-24-2009, 08:08 AM	#6 (permalink)
adidasss Slavic gay sauce Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 7,993	I take it you're an angsty teen? __________________ “Think of what a paradise this world would be if men were kind and wise.” - Kurt Vonnegut, Cat's Cradle. Last.fm

03-24-2009, 08:32 AM	#8 (permalink)
adidasss Slavic gay sauce Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 7,993	Then what could you possibly find so alluring about these lyrics? Could you maybe go into your feelings about them a bit further instead of just posting them with no reference to where they come from or an actual elaboration as to why we should pay attention to them? What was your intention with making this thread? Why did you put it in the general forums? Etc etc... __________________ “Think of what a paradise this world would be if men were kind and wise.” - Kurt Vonnegut, Cat's Cradle. Last.fm

03-24-2009, 08:42 AM	#10 (permalink)
adidasss Slavic gay sauce Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 7,993	Well, that answers one of my questions. So, what about "numbing the pain" makes it the "best ever"? Is there some pain you need numbing? Having you tried aspirin? Or is it something more deep, something that hurts your adolescent soul? Tell us more about this "pain" of yours, mm? __________________ “Think of what a paradise this world would be if men were kind and wise.” - Kurt Vonnegut, Cat's Cradle. Last.fm

02-27-2009, 07:02 AM	#3 (permalink)
~~coryallen2~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: lorain,ohio Posts: 909	ok...brokencyde are you serious im not talking about scene kid bull shxt

03-24-2009, 08:34 AM	#9 (permalink)
~~coryallen2~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: lorain,ohio Posts: 909	first off because it has to do with music in "genral" and if there is a lyrics thred please direct me in that area please.