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Stone Birds 05-15-2009 06:32 AM

Hey what happens to threads started by a disabled user

Nicktarist 05-15-2009 03:07 PM

It's great, not TOO hazy. It needs some work, but most of it revolves around you brooding over it for a couple of weeks. What really helps is when you put the song away for a month (work on some other songs in the process), then come back to it later. You'll wonder why you wrote some things in the first place.

Son of JayJamJah 05-15-2009 03:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by coryallen2 (Post 655055)
When your gone.
I'll be right there.
By your side.
no one can rtake you from me.
Not in this life.

I'll always be by your side.
In life and death.
Everytime I see you
I lose my breath.

I never knew.
That I could be with you.
through all of this bad and all of this good.
you've been with me.
I could never ask for anyone new.
Those eyes are so pretty and blue.
I can't dream of one day without you.






Just a short little song I wrote. It isnt very good. but there it is.

Wordsworth, Keets, Coryallen2

That Sounds about right

Guybrush 05-16-2009 06:26 AM

cory, your threads have been merged into one.

Read : http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...e-posting.html

Send me or another mod a PM with a link to this thread if you want us to change the name.

coryallen2 05-26-2009 09:51 AM

I am sent from hell, your worst fears brought to life.
I come with no regards for anyone.
Now cross the planks of the burning bridge.
And this time I'll lead you to death.
I've come to take your lives, another step closer to death.
With every breath I take another takes their last.

Execute the mass and spread your disease.
No one really cares you're dying on you're knees.
Every inch of ground is paved with lies.
Your only concern is for yourself.
Behind her smile lies rotten teeth.
Running reckless a human race to the end of time.
Don't run away bitch cause your all mine.

someonecompletelyrandom 05-27-2009 07:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stone Birds (Post 659493)
Hey what happens to threads started by a disabled user

Absolutely nothing

Stone Birds 05-27-2009 08:07 PM

How long is he banned?

sleepy jack 05-27-2009 08:09 PM

A week unless he makes multiple accounts and pretends they're his siblings in which case the ban will be extended for each multiple account he makes.

Stone Birds 05-27-2009 08:13 PM

he's been making multiple accounts?
weird

someonecompletelyrandom 05-27-2009 09:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stone Birds (Post 667227)
he's been making multiple accounts?
weird

I've always had a secret theory that you were actually coryallen2...


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