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Old 04-30-2006, 03:07 AM   #11 (permalink)
that's my war face.
 
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My hands knew the curve of your hips, I knew the path of your mind.


That is one ****ing brilliant line. The first verse I didn't really like, I found it a bit cheesy, but the rest of the song was good especially the last verse. And like CQ said, it's good for something you wrote in 10 minutes.
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