Jesus Christ I'm Amazing - The poetic updates of a madman

thecowboykiller · 10-11-2005, 09:06 AM

...seriously...a lot of brandston's lyrics make me want to kick myself in the throat...i think it makes it especially annoying that they are from cleveland... which is the scene i am from......

thecowboykiller · 10-11-2005, 09:10 AM

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Originally Posted by thecowboykiller

...seriously...a lot of brandston's lyrics make me want to kick myself in the throat...i think it makes it especially annoying that they are from cleveland... which is the scene i am from......

and just to add...the fact that their entire last album was written about this girl i know...and that same girl now despises "the guy" who wrote them for her...kinda makes me laugh a little inside......and also...all of the little groupie preteen chicks who swoon over them.....ha....they dont even get it....

DontRunMeOver · 10-11-2005, 09:12 AM

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Originally Posted by thecowboykiller

and just to add...the fact that their entire last album was written about this girl i know...and that same girl now despises "the guy" who wrote them for her...kinda makes me laugh a little inside......and also...all of the little groupie preteen chicks who swoon over them.....ha....they dont even get it....

What's with all of the dots? Do you keep drifting in and out of conciousness?

Ma Cherie · 10-11-2005, 10:21 AM

either way the worst lyrics i've heard.....
have to be Dir en Grey's enlish translation to ZAN posted below:

remains -ZAN-

painted with saliva
a paling body was
clung to within sight
a distorted picture of cruelty

even emotionlessness is rotting
dance a short life
the memory I saw at the end
you laughing... die

*

Psycho while warping, revolving
Psycho cruelty unchanging
Psycho Past Trap
Psycho Past Trip
by.... Death Trap

**

Lyrics - Kyo
Music - Kaoru

* The words Kyo mumbles here are:

you are not here
you are laughing
you are not here
I am not here

** The words Kyo mumbles here are:

you are not here
I am not here
you are not here
I am not here
I am coming

TheBig3 · 10-12-2005, 10:20 PM

who?

royal · 10-14-2005, 01:09 AM

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TheBig3 · 10-21-2005, 03:39 PM

So Im writing this song and the refrain is a bitch (as always) to come up with. What are your opinions of refrains, or songs without them? Let me hear your thoughts, and if you know any, let me know.

adidasss · 10-21-2005, 03:45 PM

a song without a refrain is not a song at all....

miroo · 10-21-2005, 04:23 PM

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Originally Posted by adidasss

a song without a refrain is not a song at all....

that's what I'd say too

riseagainstrocks · 10-21-2005, 04:43 PM

depends on the style really.

A chorus (refrain) is a integral part of pop and pop rock songs but many heavy style of music do not include them at all. Pay attention to the sound you're going for and if it feels right add one. I often will have similar sounding chorus's but change up the wording a bit if it sounds too dull.

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10-11-2005, 10:21 AM	#44 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	either way the worst lyrics i've heard..... have to be Dir en Grey's enlish translation to ZAN posted below: remains -ZAN- painted with saliva a paling body was clung to within sight a distorted picture of cruelty even emotionlessness is rotting dance a short life the memory I saw at the end you laughing... die * Psycho while warping, revolving Psycho cruelty unchanging Psycho Past Trap Psycho Past Trip by.... Death Trap ** Lyrics - Kyo Music - Kaoru * The words Kyo mumbles here are: you are not here you are laughing you are not here I am not here The words Kyo mumbles here are: you are not here I am not here you are not here I am not here I am coming __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash.** http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

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TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	Refrain So Im writing this song and the refrain is a bitch (as always) to come up with. What are your opinions of refrains, or songs without them? Let me hear your thoughts, and if you know any, let me know. __________________ I've moved to a new address

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thecowboykiller Groupie Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 8	...seriously...a lot of brandston's lyrics make me want to kick myself in the throat...i think it makes it especially annoying that they are from cleveland... which is the scene i am from......

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adidasss Slavic gay sauce Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 7,993	a song without a refrain is not a song at all.... __________________ “Think of what a paradise this world would be if men were kind and wise.” - Kurt Vonnegut, Cat's Cradle. Last.fm

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riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	depends on the style really. A chorus (refrain) is a integral part of pop and pop rock songs but many heavy style of music do not include them at all. Pay attention to the sound you're going for and if it feels right add one. I often will have similar sounding chorus's but change up the wording a bit if it sounds too dull. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...