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Music Addict
Join Date: Feb 2009
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Edit: Skip to page 4 for revised versions of all songs but this one and "The Veteran's Show"
I wrote this with a dream girl in mind, but each verse describes a different experience I've had. The music is written, but not recorded, so just imagine it being sung relatively fast and playfully. It's my first song I've posted here. That being said, don't go easy with criticism. How could I really know you? We mostly talked with fingers but we would write all the night through When we got together, you weren't allowed to linger So we ran as wildfires burned our tracks! You're breath tastes so new, When I kiss you I feel naive Even though I teach you To be friendly when we pollute my garage and careful not to burn the flowers there whose roots we grind up and put in envelopes! I tell you that I love you, And you tell me I am cliche but my mouth is stitched and glued, unless I borrow from fairy tales But you untangle my words before get to Say them in my peculiar way that frays the ears of people who ignore cries of wolf by day and believe witches trick children We sit on roofs of my childhood, Where rooms below I learned to read and be polite while you were in another neighborhood, with houses wound much to tight. Now you teach me which fruit is ripe for the picking, and not to steal what's not ready to be eaten Will will watch as cinders erupt in each others eyes The heat will char my lungs, and melt the joints of my spine with my teeth fused to my tongue I cry, You're all i really know about life! Last edited by Naked; 05-20-2009 at 09:02 PM. |
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