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02-20-2009, 01:05 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Souls of Sound Sailors
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Mojave
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Some recent Poetry
Poetry Iv'e written in the past couple weeks, looking for some feedback... so tell me what you think.
Edit: Okay, so, I'm really curious as to not only what people think of these as far as liking them, but what they are taking from them. Some interpretation would be nice, it would really help me know how well I'm getting things across. You don't have to do all three, just pick one, If it isn't too much to ask! Poem#1 Problems in Pictures Her playgrounds in ruins Pictures she can't touch Take her from the world They leave her divided From me and everything Her minds an analgesic If I could hear her scream, or cry, or vividly recall Maybe she could see There's no problem here at all Poem#2 Visable Light Iris knows my face Photons bring flowers to Her hospital towers for Cornea to hold in place Scared sick, petrified hands unwilling to see me or grace In Cornea her flowers encased She believes this to be safe Only lies infect her sight Truth is finding yourself Poem #3 Hysterical blindness My mother's anomaly Father, my poor host Searching for aimlessly My permanet death Iv'e Inherited Grandma She ferments me and She refuses Fathers insensible will Unnumberable, His Head-shrinkers, His anti-biotics, His snorted sunlight, They embrace me Cannot kill me, Cannot cure me You are not normal You need me, Father Last edited by Schizotypic; 02-21-2009 at 08:08 PM. |
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