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02-18-2009, 11:23 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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darkcornerinthecloset's Songwriting Journal
FIRST SONG POSTED!!! MAGICAL SKILLS!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ For a while i wanted naught but you my heart was breaking inside But we never would have made it Everybody knows that Juliet had to die So close and yet so far away the distance a short few miles our love it was defeated remember this please now, love; never to meet again [chorus] You were all that i wanted all i needed was you my tears inside the dark miss me through the distance call me when you get home love me less please oh please please don't abandon me Kiss me in the darkness a huge mistake? but love is always true i didn't mean to i only would have ruined all i had with you so close and yet so far away the world divides us still a dirty greenish monster watching two hearts closely somewhere between you two [chorus] our love divided, cut in two your love for me runs deeper i cant except my peace of mind while what slope is growing steeper i don't deserve you i never will i don't know why you bother my passions somewhere hidden safe inside a cold dark cave but the question is, is it really for you? and still i lie in a tug-of-war waiting to decide someone must pull harder this ditch is growing deeper will i make it out alive? [chorus] still the pain lies close inside of me but where now can i turn? parents never listen my friends, they are the problem can God tell me whom to choose will i ever truly mean it? just three simple words? i can not. or will not? give away and me, i see less clearly now than ever i had before [chorus] does God have his glasses they're not for me, i see so thus is it not for me tho know? so i go and i will wait i'll wait forever for my perfect mate hes maybe not any of you but if i had to choose, this moment here i know i would choose you [chorus] because , love, love you i do |
02-18-2009, 12:25 PM | #3 (permalink) |
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My Religion
3 days ago one of my friends reawakened my Christianity, and scene then i have been reading the bible, praying, and coincidentally writing songs about my renewed faith.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My Religion To go out of your way to resist temptation Following you into a new life giving the one i have right now to Jesus But i cant see you clearly even now i know Satan seems the one who's in control To love God with all my heart and all my soul it seems Cannot be done so feasibly by me And where now can i go? Will i be doomed to never know the peace and love that only you can bring to me? The prodigal son runs away from home to live a sinful life If i should be so lucky to return to God And what now can i do? So i will sit and pray to you And pray that you will never let me die The sheep that wonders far away so easily be led astray your love is strong enough to hold me here i pray The Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit hold me in your light help me be the best that i can be And i will turn to you And all that you can do 'cause you can heal the blind man so he'll see and be Please, Lord be the one who can save me Help me see |
02-18-2009, 01:24 PM | #4 (permalink) |
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Unworthy Forever
She lies beside me all the time
and what can i do? keeping me awake all the time when sanity balances on the edge of a dime if i could flip a coin and see who and yet there's far too much at stake and i don't have the dime or the time [chorus] But late last night and the night before the world is changing in a minute i dont see how she still sees me Unworthy forever of who? Unworthy forever of you She sits beside me in the dark do i really see her clearly the sadness in her dark brow eyes they're looking through the dark and they see me or so i've heard I run beside her in the park i think i see her clearly the blueness in September skies the images fly past my eyes the voice of people in the world are singing in the sun the faces of this big bad world are cryin' and dyin' and leaving us all alone [chorus] she stands behind me out of depth and Earth it shall keep spinning the strong will still keep winning my head will keep spinning while evil never changes the good goes flashing by the dark and light forever hide in different shades of gray our survival hinges on small things we may say goodbye life forever changes like the tide but some of it must stay stuck on a reef or in the bay do i want this shade of gray? is it a fraction too dark or light? Please drop my hand and say goodbye its better for us all If love's a pool im drowning and yet it seems im always frowning [chorus] If i cant deal with **** today a ****ty life is how i'll stay Unworthy together forever Unworthy forever together [chorus] Unworthy forever together |
02-18-2009, 09:10 PM | #5 (permalink) |
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darkcornerinthecloset's steaming pile of ****
i already posted this once today but my computers being mean so if its on there twice than i apologize.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To go out of your way to resist temptation Following you into a new life Living the one I have right now with Jesus But I cant see you clearly even now i know Satan seems the one who's in control To love God with all my heart and all my soul it seems Cannot be done so feasibly by me And where now can i go? Will i be doomed to never know The peace and love that only you can bring to me The Prodigal Son ran away from home to live a sinful life If i should be so lucky to return to God And what now can I do? So I will sit and pray to you And pray that you will never let me die The sheep who wonders far away So easily be led astray Your love is strong enough to hold me here i pray The Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit Hold me in your light Help me be the best that i can be And i will turn to you And all that you can do 'Cause you can heal the blind man so he'll see and be Please, lord be the one who can save me Let me see |
02-19-2009, 05:47 PM | #6 (permalink) |
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Please dont abandon me
For a while I wanted nothing but you
My heart was breaking inside of me We never would have made it Everybody knows that Juliet had to die So close and an yet so far away The distance a short few miles But no one I knew could know Never now to meet again [chorus] You were all that I wanted All i needed was you My tears all through the dark Miss me through the distance Call me when you get home Love me less but please oh please Please don't abandon me Kiss me in the darkness Your huge mistake? Is our love really true love? I didn't mean to end it I only would have ruined All i had with you So close and yet so far away The world divides us still Looking at him with you now What can we do now When we're hiding our lives from them? [chorus] And the jealousy astounds me The Green and angry hate and fear A fear that i wont have you near to me 'Cause or love now divided cut in two Your love for me runs deeper I cannot accept my peace of mind When this slope's still growing steeper If i don't deserve you i never will Is this way foolish or is it wiser to hide this in the corner of the closet still But I don't know why we try My passion is somewhere hiding cant be found by me or found by you it would seem right now So my question is Is it really meant for anyone or you? [chorus] Still the pain lies close inside of me And where now can i turn? to all the empty people all the guys or girls The world don't understand So God please tell me who to choose Will I ever really mean it? Just three simple sylables Making up the sentence of our lives? I will not, can not give away The truth inside of me But me, I see less clearly now thn i did before Still I still want more to love [chorus] Does God have his glasses? Or is it not for me to see True love until the time i comprehend? But if he made me choose right now Forever to be left with her Is that Hell or Heaven Or somewhere in between? I can't decide right now [chorus] Because out of all of you out in this world Loving's what I'll do So maybe I'll love you |
02-19-2009, 09:44 PM | #7 (permalink) |
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Agony
Im thinking this up on the spot if it sucks i apologize but I've got to write it right now
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Agony its gonna take away the best of me Throw me away No knife across my wrist just plain old pain i know Your Beautiful i saw the day i met you i would fall for you But maybe not today I see it clearly now Don't want what i can have I see it clearly now what stands in front of me So what can i do? to make myself feel thankful for your love but i turn away Turn away to my dark place abandoning the ones who love me But who can love someone like me? Agony its rippin appart me Leaving chills across my spine Throwing me into the pits of hell This Jealousy why does it still exist? i see your name possessive and insane i am Please take me away to a land of goodness land of grace save me from the demons that i see save me from the darkness in my eyes Agony i know that she will comfort me i don't deserve that he will do so too My Therapy am i disturbed or just insane just tell me now the anger, death, and lust will stay but Agony is able to decide Agony is able to decide Agony is able to decide that im not worth it anymore Broken beyond reason beyond pain She loves me still and yet he Loves me still but i hate myself still So where can i now turn? Lucifer please stand aside Don't let the demons still reside I cant take it anymore Drown the flesh in water so the devils finally die Save me from myself Savior of the world and all who still reside Save me from myself your healing hands can do it all Just save me from myself Agony stay the hell away from me Let the drugs the knife, the drinks still come Leave me to my pain and all the lousy side effects it takes to free myself from the clutches of the world of Satan Agony i cannot embrace it freely Save me from the hell it brings Death is life and life is death Save me from the pain it brings taking me away Taking me away, you can save me from the pain it brings save me from the death it brings save me from the Agony your saving cup can do it all I've heard Agony is able to decide Agony is able to decide Agony is able to decide that I'm not worth it anymore Broken beyond reason beyond pain |
02-19-2009, 11:49 PM | #9 (permalink) |
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It's overly too long, you probably could paraphrase a lot of what you said into better constructed stanzas, but I could see the lyrics building up in one of those 8 minute songs that layer and layer to a crescendo finale.
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02-20-2009, 02:44 PM | #10 (permalink) |
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Mother Nature Turn Away
The snow keeps falling
Falling through the streets through the night Covers up the stains and slush Upon this face In the morning it is gone the cars and people, me and you looking at this world its never really changing [chorus] Mother Nature turn away the people ruining your world The smog and shadows in the city Looking through the looking glass See yourself right now Reflections deep despairing Its Hell on Earth Is Heaven in the sky? Abandoning this life I've here Abandoning the world into its doom These shallow faces Hypocrites of the world Ugly shades of brown and black Covered temporarily by white Forever, never change at all at all in truth [chorus] Veracity can change it all Don't fool yourself to thinking That its OK, cause Misery will not forget This Misery will still love company Just stop yourself from thinking That its OK, cause Misery will not forgive you [chorus] So when my time does come I will not look back Go down or up Anywhere but here Or maybe somewhere in between Some shade of gray, not brown, not black, not white Somewhere Mother Nature creates for me Or for us all Do I believe what I say? Or is it all just lies? Follow me and see Or rather. . .Don't Don't come where i am going And sure as Hell don't go where i am leaving Stay right where you are in all your simple adequacy And stay away from this world And me [chorus] |
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